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I have been turning out a song about every two weeks. i am challenging myself now to only ten days. All songs will be from scratch. in fact right now I don't even have one in my head. haha I know that someday it will end, so there you have it. Play the tracks only if you feel like it. There is now intentional direction for them at present. I hope you are healthy and happy.

https://soundcloud.com/feaker66/i-think-i-fell

I think I fell in love



She dancin round the fire she’s lookin over here D Bm

I moved a little closer and chugged another beer D Bm G A

I think I have my courage up..now what should I say

I don’t wanna scare here away



I think I fell I love from the first time I saw you G CG D G C D D

not so much yur looks, but your silly cool ways

I think I fell in love you’re smile is so killer G CG D

I think I fell in love and I know that it’s crazy as can be G C F G.....D

could be my lucky day



I think she looked at me again my boots feel like they’re glued

Tryin to think of pick up lines but I don’t have a clue

I see other guys are lookin..smilin at the view

I’m hopin I’ll be goin home with you



The fire’s burn low getting harder to see

It’s hard to believe she’s settin next to me

I read the lyrics and thought Dang!...there's something special going on here!

Then I listened to the tune...it sounds like a track from the Barney the Dinosaur TV series.

Great lyrics and imagery, though.

Patrick wrote: ↑

Wed Oct 27, 2021 10:41 pm

I read the lyrics and thought Dang!...there's something special going on here!

Then I listened to the tune...it sounds like a track from the Barney the Dinosaur TV series.

Great lyrics and imagery, though.

Hey, I like Barney the Dinosaur, so yeah, that is a big compliment. I can turn out songs quickly, I never said they might end up on the radio.

I wasn't trying to insult you.

I seriously believe a track like that....with more lyrics for youngsters... would work well for a Children's Television Show.

FWIW: I like it, Paul.
IMHO - the title 'should be' My Lucky Day...
and you could repeat that as a refrain.