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Epic Cinematic Hybrid Trailer Instrumental
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2021 10:30 pm
by johndalenow
Please refer to the REVISED version above. Thank you.
Re: Epic Cinematic Hybrid Trailer Instrumental
Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2021 1:56 am
by Zaychi
There's something weird rythmically going on with the break around 0:57; the first beat after feels "too early" and makes the violin lead-up break in a very strange plcae (which also starts in a weird bar place, like the 2nd eighth or something? I'd check the bar/count structure there.
Overall, I think the track lacks a low end. The droney synth doesn't do enough there.
Re: Epic Cinematic Hybrid Trailer Instrumental
Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2021 11:10 pm
by johndalenow
Zaychi wrote: ↑Sat Oct 30, 2021 1:56 am
There's something weird rythmically going on with the break around 0:57; the first beat after feels "too early" and makes the violin lead-up break in a very strange plcae (which also starts in a weird bar place, like the 2nd eighth or something? I'd check the bar/count structure there.
Overall, I think the track lacks a low end. The droney synth doesn't do enough there.
I fixed the violin entrance and rhythm sync difficulty. Also added low end beginning at the 2nd section, still not mixed though.
Give another listen, if you are so inclined.
https://soundcloud.com/john-dale-music/ ... f9e9d36d7c
Thanks,
John
Re: Epic Cinematic Hybrid Trailer Instrumental
Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2021 5:00 am
by karafinman
Hi. Nice work. I find the orchestra hit very grating to my ears--not a good, convincing sample. When the violins enter it is very nice. The choir voices are not up to par with what's out there. I think it's fixable.