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ORIGINAL, CHRISTMAS HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTALS - Feedback Requested

Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2021 11:13 pm
by rob3rto
https://www.taxi.com/members/rOA4Z8YfQu ... -lo-strung

I cued more off of "Lofimas" than the other two, but they all seemed to have sleigh bells, and a repeating melody. Feedback appreciated.

TAXI # S211127HO
This Company is searching for Mid-to-Up-Tempo Instrumentals in the general stylistic wheelhouse of the following references:

"Christmas Day Sale" by DJ DENZ The Rooster https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uyny7nxeLxM

"Lofimas" by Ameer Corro - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YfGFJ7irFa0

"Gift Wrapped" by Ballpoint - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TaYxWTAmIv0

Please submit festive Christmas Hip-Hop Instrumentals with slick beats, catchy motifs, engaging rhythms, and a healthy dose of holiday cheer. Please be sure that your production and any virtual instruments or samples you use are fresh, modern, and high-quality. If your tracks could get listeners in the holiday spirit, send them in! All submissions should be about 2 to 4 minutes in length, give or take. Non-faded, stinger endings are required for this request.

Re: ORIGINAL, CHRISTMAS HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTALS - Feedback Requested

Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2021 8:55 am
by DouglasKnight
Sounds good! My suggestion would be that the drums loop could use more punch and variation, especially the backbeat. Maybe switch to handclaps at some point and then add in a low-pass filter to keep it interesting? Nice work overall, though and best of luck with it! Doug

Re: ORIGINAL, CHRISTMAS HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTALS - Feedback Requested

Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2021 9:10 am
by rob3rto
DouglasKnight wrote:
Thu Nov 25, 2021 8:55 am
Sounds good! My suggestion would be that the drums loop could use more punch and variation, especially the backbeat. Maybe switch to handclaps at some point and then add in a low-pass filter to keep it interesting? Nice work overall, though and best of luck with it! Doug
Great, thanks Doug! Good suggestions, I'll have a go adding some variety there.