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Disco tune forwarded thanks to this group!

Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2022 6:47 pm
by nicotina
Hey, I workshopped this disco tune here about 2 weeks ago, and it just got forwarded. Here is the finished version.

https://soundcloud.com/vincent-s-nicoti ... al_sharing

It never would have made it if you guys hadn't set me straight on what I needed to fix. Thanks Paulie, Telefunkin, and Marco! I learned a lot about using strings. The main thing I didn't understand before is that it takes a lot of strings to sound like an orchestra. You pretty much need at least 3 sections, like violins 1, violins 2 and violas or cellos. Anything less isn't very convincing to compete with an R & B Rhythm section.

I'm going to bring tunes here more often...

Vince

Re: Disco tune forwarded thanks to this group!

Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2022 6:56 pm
by funsongs
WTG, Vince.
Disco here...
Disco dare...
fun track, too.
:? :P

Re: Disco tune forwarded thanks to this group!

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2022 1:56 am
by melodea
Nice Job!
I feel like the drums could have more definition, I think it's the choice of Kick and Snare and the mix that could improve the overall sound.
Otherwise Thumbs up on that one!

Good luck!

Chris

Re: Disco tune forwarded thanks to this group!

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2022 5:57 am
by superkons
Congratulations, Vince, your tune greatly improved from its inception, bravo!

Re: Disco tune forwarded thanks to this group!

Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2022 2:52 pm
by Paulie
Way to go! You just reaped the rewards of this wonderful community. Congrats!

Re: Disco tune forwarded thanks to this group!

Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2022 5:18 pm
by myk247365
Yep, that's disco! You nailed it. My only suggestion would be to bring out the hihat a little more, but I also have a bit of hearing loss... :D

Hope this helps.

Michael