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Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2022 11:45 am
by DBarnett
Thanks for your opinions/suggestions here
I haven't been able to get a FW in a while so any help would be appreciated
Here is the listing link:
https://www.taxi.com/listings/favorite# ... er%20Media.
Here's my tune "Feel Good Blues"
https://www.taxi.com/members/GJH3rS9kRt ... good-blues
Thanks for the listen
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2022 6:37 pm
by DouglasKnight
Hey man! Some really nice tones and playing on this one! To me the lead and rhythm guitar playing is close, but still a bit loose for a final version. I'd suggest replaying the guitars as tight as possible and you're there. Hope that helps?
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2022 7:14 pm
by DBarnett
DouglasKnight wrote: ↑Mon Jul 04, 2022 6:37 pm
Hey man! Some really nice tones and playing on this one! To me the lead and rhythm guitar playing is close, but still a bit loose for a final version. I'd suggest replaying the guitars as tight as possible and you're there. Hope that helps?
Thanks, Doug
I'll see if I can tighten it up a bit
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2022 7:18 pm
by gitanosoy
Hi Dave,
Ye, I agree with Doug, the band swings but the lead doesn't, a little stiff and loose in some parts and more after the break.
Good luck.
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2022 7:23 pm
by DBarnett
gitanosoy wrote: ↑Mon Jul 04, 2022 7:18 pm
Hi Dave,
Ye, I agree with Doug, the band swings but the lead doesn't, a little stiff and loose in some parts and more after the break.
Good luck.
Good feedback, Andre
It helps when two people are saying the same thing
Thanks, my friend
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2022 11:52 am
by DBarnett
Howdy!
I have updated the link or it's here for your convivence
https://www.taxi.com/members/GJH3rS9kRt ... good-blues
I know I still have some work to do so please let me know if I'm making progress and what needs tweaked
Thanks!
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:03 pm
by gitanosoy
Hi Dave,
Right from the start the rhythm guitar is off now, it was in the first post.
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:07 pm
by DBarnett
gitanosoy wrote: ↑Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:03 pm
Hi Dave,
Right from the start the rhythm guitar is off now, it was in the first post.
I'm at a loss, I don't know what I'm doing wrong
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:29 pm
by DBarnett
I updated it again
Is this just the wrong approach with the rhythm guitar?
Re: Feedback please, Blues Instrumental
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:33 pm
by lesmac
Hi Dave,
Sounds like the second stab on the rhythm is coming in early.
Maybe move it on the grid till it sounds right or replay and use a late upstroke for that one.
Get ur groove on man.
