Feedback Request: Americana
Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2022 10:51 pm
Is anyone willing to give me some feedback regarding the mixing, production, etc. on this Americana track.
Also, I could add a higher vocal part performed by a female especially during the chorus. Would that be a good idea?
Other comments are welcomed too, if something jumps out at you.
This is for the current Americana Listing
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S221204DA
Here is the link to the track:
https://www.taxi.com/members/Ef77nz5GSm ... -gone-gone
Here are the lyrics:
I reminisce about the autumn leaves
When I’m in summer sun
And all the snow I do remember sweet
Until the winter comes
Yea, I love what’s gone, gone, gone
And I’ve got proof that you did say you’d stay
Just read the ink on my bones
But you make January promises
Then February comes
And I love what’s gone, gone, gone, gone
Our love is gone, gone, gone
Why did you take your love, babe?
Why did you take your love away?
Why did you take your love, babe?
Why did you take your love away?
It takes faith to write poetry
And I got no words on this page
Everything I thought was permanent
Just fades . . .
I love what’s gone, gone, gone, gone
Our love is gone - gone (Why do I love what is gone?)
Gone, gone, gone
Gone, gone, gone
Also, I could add a higher vocal part performed by a female especially during the chorus. Would that be a good idea?
Other comments are welcomed too, if something jumps out at you.
This is for the current Americana Listing
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S221204DA
Here is the link to the track:
https://www.taxi.com/members/Ef77nz5GSm ... -gone-gone
Here are the lyrics:
I reminisce about the autumn leaves
When I’m in summer sun
And all the snow I do remember sweet
Until the winter comes
Yea, I love what’s gone, gone, gone
And I’ve got proof that you did say you’d stay
Just read the ink on my bones
But you make January promises
Then February comes
And I love what’s gone, gone, gone, gone
Our love is gone, gone, gone
Why did you take your love, babe?
Why did you take your love away?
Why did you take your love, babe?
Why did you take your love away?
It takes faith to write poetry
And I got no words on this page
Everything I thought was permanent
Just fades . . .
I love what’s gone, gone, gone, gone
Our love is gone - gone (Why do I love what is gone?)
Gone, gone, gone
Gone, gone, gone