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INVESTIGATIVE TENSION - feedback please

Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2023 3:01 pm
by tpwmusic
Hi Everyone,

I've just written a new cue for listing:

https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S230125RK

It's fore one of those INVESTIGATIVE TENSION INSTRUMENTAL requests.

Here's my attempt:

https://www.taxi.com/members/k42FZOv_Sp ... annung-i23

Would appreciate some feedback please. Am I in the right ball park? Is this worth submitting?

Cheers,
Glenn

Re: INVESTIGATIVE TENSION - feedback please

Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2023 7:44 am
by eandersonmusic
Hey Glenn!

I think this piece is great, I love the nuances, the bends, the dynamics and the use of space. Great job with that.

My only thought is that the theme or motif that comes in around 1:40 has a somewhat positive feel, almost elation. It's great, but may not work for investigative. I feel you could probably change one or two of those notes to make it feel more like a tension cue, and then it should be good to go.

Hope this helps,
Erik

Re: INVESTIGATIVE TENSION - feedback please

Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2023 1:12 pm
by eandersonmusic
Glenn,
It may be a better fit for this listing, without making too many changes to what you have now.. just a thought?
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S230125AB

Re: INVESTIGATIVE TENSION - feedback please

Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2023 4:43 pm
by tpwmusic
eandersonmusic wrote:
Tue Jan 10, 2023 1:12 pm
Glenn,
It may be a better fit for this listing, without making too many changes to what you have now.. just a thought?
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S230125AB
Thanks buddy...appreciate the heads up and feedback!

Best wishes
Glenn