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(***About the songwriting, not recording or production***)

No particular listing, just writing a song and looking for general song feedback.

I've had a love/hate relationship with this song I've been working on, and a lot of OCD on it. I had a rough guitar and vocal recorded since getting feedback with my singing... well... you know. So what's your reaction? Melody, lyrics, anything but production/performance. Does the story line make sense as far as the verses supporting the chorus? Thanks!

https://s.disco.ac/ufjmqtyaoxri

That bad, eh?
Bump

I love it. I think it's great.

Oh. I just realized the song is finished I thought it was just the lyrics. So you been the one keeping Drew too busy to finish my song. LOL

SusanAnnNorberg wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 19, 2023 2:02 pm

Oh. I just realized the song is finished I thought it was just the lyrics. So you been the one keeping Drew too busy to finish my song. LOL

Thanks, Susan! I had Drew do just a guitar and vocal for me so I could get a better feel for it and feedback. My own singing, being as bad as it is, makes it harder to judge a song.

How does he know the melody?

SusanAnnNorberg wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 19, 2023 3:06 pm

How does he know the melody?

I sent him a rough of me singing it. That's what I always do. Drop me a PM if you want to talk more about it.

Very clever! I sent a PM

Just by topic or the motivation, I'm reminded of this oldie ... Let's Go To Bed Early and Stay Up All Night