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pwaara wrote: ↑

Fri Dec 08, 2023 1:06 pm

Hey everyone,

What do you all do when a listing is asking for an instrumental, but all of the references are vocal songs? Typically, I will replace the vocal with an instrument from the genre (e.g., guitar for rock), but I have not had much success with this strategy. For example, I submitted the track below to the White Stripes instrumental listing. (Listing text is in the playlist comments.) It got returned with the following comments (no other checkboxes.)

"What I like most about this song
I appreciate the raw energy of the track and dig the creativity.

I think you could improve this song by
The theme and production could come together a little more for added overall strength. I would try a singular guitar approach to start as the left/right is a little busy in current form.

I returned or forwarded this song because
The writing/production could be more competitive with the reference material. Note "Seven Nation Army" by The White Stripes for review."

What do you all think?

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DouglasKnight wrote: ↑

Fri Dec 08, 2023 7:40 pm

Hey Pat, sorry to hear about the return. I submitted two tracks and had one returned as well. Your track isn't bad at all, but I'd have to agree with the screener, it could have been been tighter performance-wise and focused on building up the main riff rather than adding a lead/melody as well. When a listing is asking for an instrumental, but all of the references are vocal songs, I've learned to be careful not to make any melodic element too busy or distracting in case it's used with dialog. Hope that's helpful!