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I'll never give up..revised

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 8:17 am
by feaker66
The chorus was draggin a bunch. Sped the whole track by four. added more chorus words. Rapid bass notes. ha ha I am such a bumbler.

https://soundcloud.com/feaker66/ill-never-give-up

I’ll never give up

I’ve tried at love..but failed then I’d wait..for another day Dm C Bb A
another chance..another love.. another way..to begin Dm C Dm

Patience and time I'll not yield you'll be be mine F C Gm Dm
If only just a dream in my mind.. in this lonely moment in time Bb C…..Dm

I’ll never give up..I can not give in F C
The hurt has come before ..but I’m gonna try again Bb C
I’ll never give up.I’ll try a new avenue avenue F C
I know you're out there somewhere..and I’ll never stop looking for you Bb C Dm

I smile..they look..but they soon turn away Dm C Bb A
Could it be my looks..my skinnyness Dm C
My scraggly hair…I do have awkward ways Dm C…Dm

Patience and time I'll not yield you'll be be mine F C Gm Dm
If only just a dream in my mind.. in this lonely moment in time Bb C…..Dm

I’ll never give up..I can not give in F C Bb C
The hurt has come before ..but I’m gonna try again
I’ll never give up.I’ll try a new avenue F C
I know you're out there somewhere..and I’ll never stop looking for you Bb C Dm

Re: conceived last Tuesday and born this morning

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 1:44 pm
by BradleyHagen
Is this for a particular brief?? It is very 60's pop, like Donovan or something.... i kinda dig it!

Re: conceived last Tuesday and born this morning

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 4:15 pm
by feaker66
BradleyHagen wrote:
Mon Apr 29, 2024 1:44 pm
Is this for a particular brief?? It is very 60's pop, like Donovan or something.... i kinda dig it!
Hi Bradley. This is not for any brief. I try to make at least one song a week. I just sit in my lazy boy, finger pick a d minor chord and start singing some words. I finish the song and then usually change it ten more times. I do just one take with a click track and the acoustic and then think about if it is worth actually doing the full version. About a quarter of the time, I proceed on.I have never made a nickel on a track. Just enjoy the journey and a little feedback if I am lucky. I'm still young at heart, but 75 years old. thanks for your take on the song

Re: conceived last Tuesday and born this morning

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 6:03 pm
by BradleyHagen
Very cool indeed! Keep up the great work!