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Question Only About Melody

Posted: Mon Dec 23, 2024 10:40 am
by Casey H
*poof*

Re: Question Only About Melody

Posted: Mon Dec 23, 2024 4:50 pm
by feaker66
Hey, Merry Christmas Casey. Never heard a voice like that before. Drums to me are distracting a bit. A lone vocal might work better for critiquing. Liked the prechorus the most and the minor chords in the chorus. The verse notes need some deviation IMHO. Soon as it calms down around here, I will play along with my acoustic just for fun. Take care and don't present peek.

Re: Question Only About Melody

Posted: Mon Dec 23, 2024 5:33 pm
by Casey H
feaker66 wrote:
Mon Dec 23, 2024 4:50 pm
Hey, Merry Christmas Casey. Never heard a voice like that before. Drums to me are distracting a bit. A lone vocal might work better for critiquing. Liked the prechorus the most and the minor chords in the chorus. The verse notes need some deviation IMHO. Soon as it calms down around here, I will play along with my acoustic just for fun. Take care and don't present peek.
Thanks Feaker
Happy Holidays! I was getting ready to take down the post when I saw your thoughtful reply. I wasn't happy enough with it to share.

Warmest,
:D Casey