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INVESTIGATIVE CRIME INSTRUMENTALS
Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2025 5:21 pm
by mteezykeys
Hey guys I'm giving investigative crime instros another shot. 1 new composition and 2 revisions from previous returns that were "close".
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My Tracks
Any feedback is welcome.
Thanks in advance!
Re: INVESTIGATIVE CRIME INSTRUMENTALS
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2025 7:36 am
by RealPickle
Hey man, I think you're on the right track with these. My only concern would be the part of the brief where it says "The pacing of your pieces should feel deliberate and investigative, not overly dramatic or cinematic"
To me, these stray into the "cinematic" a bit too much at times. The big cinematic drums and swells etc. Not sure which of these is new, which are revisions, and what you've changed, so if you had the big drums and sweeps/swells before and they weren't mentioned you can disregard, but that's the biggest thing that jumped out to me.
Re: INVESTIGATIVE CRIME INSTRUMENTALS
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2025 9:36 am
by mteezykeys
RealPickle wrote: ↑Thu Jul 31, 2025 7:36 am
To me, these stray into the "cinematic" a bit too much at times. The big cinematic drums and swells etc. Not sure which of these is new, which are revisions, and what you've changed, so if you had the big drums and sweeps/swells before and they weren't mentioned you can disregard, but that's the biggest thing that jumped out to me.
Wow, nice catch, thanks for listening and the feedback.