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feedback please - new studio tracks - this modern empire

Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 12:51 pm
by this modern empire
We have just added two new studio tracks to soundclick.

We would love your thoughts:

Love is the New Black:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8890403

How You See the World:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8890369

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen.
Much appreciated
this modern empire

Re: feedback please - new studio tracks - this modern empire

Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 7:44 pm
by ottlukk
I liked "Love is the New Black" better than "How You See The World", though both were nicely done. On "Love is . .", I thought the intro started too slow for what came later . . . I would shorten the 16 second intro . . . the tempo and vibe picked up noticeably at :42, and that's where the song got interesting. Maybe you were trying for a tempo contrast, but I'm not sure it works (at least for me).
Also, did you consider "Far From Me" as a title for the second tune? As often as it's repeated, it might work better.
Welcome to the forums!
Ott

Re: feedback please - new studio tracks - this modern empire

Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 8:08 pm
by eeoo
Hi there, nice tunes! I dig the vibe of both of them. I thought there were some pitch issues with the vocal on the first tune, love the drum sound on the second one! I'm in a band called This Old Earthquake, almost the opposite of your name...eo.

Re: feedback please - new studio tracks - this modern empire

Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 4:48 am
by this modern empire
hi guys
thanks so much for the feedback. really appreciate it. so glad you liked the tracks.
thanks
this modern empire

Re: feedback please - new studio tracks - this modern empire

Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:16 am
by glender
listened on laptop speakers, nice vibe, will try to listen back later on something better

Re: feedback please - new studio tracks - this modern empire

Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 5:33 am
by this modern empire
thanks for listening. it will definately sound better on a stereo. We recorded these tracks at RDMS studio in Adelaide Australia.

Re: feedback please - new studio tracks - this modern empire

Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:47 am
by Mellow D
Hi Guys,

Really like the feeling and emotion conveyed.

I think the vocal is good but there are a few pitch issues here and there. All in all with a bit of tweaking and mixing could hear this on the radio.

Mellow D