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What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 12:43 am
by Donny Pike
Aloha from the jungle. Here is my latest song from my jungle hut. thanks to solar collected power and satellite broadband.
It's about 3:14 long and as of yet has no title. Take a listen and if a title comes to mind pass it on
http://DonnyPike.org/320kbsMP3s/2010/6-11-10.mp3
Donny
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 5:15 am
by Penz2nz
Donny,
I would pull the brass section back a little in the mix and call it something like:
Wall Street Pressure
Hectic Office
The drum track reminds me of someone typing away on a keyboard.
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 11:06 am
by Donny Pike
Thanks Wayne, I will add them to my list of potential titles. Thanks again for listening.
Donny
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 11:49 am
by fret17
Hi Donny....I enjoyed that piece very much....as I listened I imagined a leaf that had fallen from a tree into a brooke that caught a current into a stronger stream that led to rapids , tumbling over rocks, turning corners and rushing towards the falls and at the very end ,just before it's about to go over the falls it gets caught for a split second on a fallen branch and a gust of wind sends it airborn ,free in the wind...I would call it
"Final Freedom"...Just my take on it...and it was wonderful!
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 1:59 pm
by Donny Pike
Thanks Fret17, great images and a fitting title. Glad you liked it.
Donny
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 5:08 pm
by ottlukk
Can't help you with the title, but I thought it really wonderful. I especially like the way the intensity built at the end.
Ott
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 5:36 pm
by eeoo
I was picturing ants marching along in perfect order on the jungle floor bringing gifts to their queen...
Behold The Queen!
I'm sure most of you don't know that Donny sang with The Lettermen for many years, when are we going to hear a vocal piece from you, Donny? All the best, enjoyed it very much as always...eo.
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 6:41 pm
by Cruciform
Hi Donny,
I agree with fret17. I like the imagery, and "Final freedom" seems to fit both that imagery and the song.
In terms of the song, I really like it - the flow, the direction, the buildup. Personally, I think a classical guitar playing the lead melody and real drums would boost it
immensely. But don't change the song. It's great.
Rob O.
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 7:05 pm
by Penz2nz
Hey Donny,
I feel honored to be sharing a thread with one of the voices of The Lettermen. "I Only Have Eyes for You" was one of my favorite songs right after my high school days.
Re: What do you think would make a good title to this song ?
Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 9:06 pm
by dannydep
Hi Donny,
how about "Pike's Peek - Mondo al Rondo"
Penz2nz wrote:Hey Donny,
I feel honored to be sharing a thread with one of the voices of The Lettermen. "I Only Have Eyes for You" was one of my favorite songs right after my high school days.
Holy S***,
I just pulled out 5 Capital LP’s from my vinyl collection.
“A Song For Young Love”, “Once Upon A Time”, “College Standards”, “The Lettermen in Concert” and even a Christmas album, “For Christmas This Year”
I got my puberic start with your music. My favorites, "When I Fall In Love" and "Once Upon A Time".
It certainly is an honor.
Ciao, Dan