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Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 11:19 am
by Satish
Hi folks, I'm Satish here from India. I'm brand new at Taxi and my first submission was for the oil company jingle called Om Shanti. I took a slightly more electronic/orchestral approach to the arrangement. Your critiques will be invaluable in me finding some direction here at Taxi. So please feel free with both positives and negatives. Cheers, Satish/..
http://www.taxi.com/satish
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 8:08 pm
by rld
Hi Satish,
You don't have any songs on your page.
It may be that you didn't check the "make it public" option?...or something else.
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 9:49 pm
by Satish
Sorry rookie mistake! Fixed it now. Please listen to it u guys. Thanks for letting me know rld. Cheers, Satish/..
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 3:59 am
by cardell
Welcome Satish,
I enjoyed that
but...I found the static sound at the start quite distracting. It sounds like it is intentional but to me it sounds bad.
Stuart
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:22 am
by psbelote
Satish, this is another great entry for this listing. Including mine, I've heard 5 differet entries on the forum for this listing. Good luck. A lot of competetion on the oil ad here.
PB
http://www.taxi.com/patandsherry
http://www.patandsherry.com
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:24 am
by singer1
Hey Satish, I really like this; sounds lively and fresh; sounds ready for T.V. to me. Good luck to you! D.B.
... the only race we're in, is the human race... by D.B.
www.taxi.com/davebradley
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:37 am
by mr clean
Hey Satish
I can't say whether or not it would work for that commercial but, It sounded like other stuff I have heard on commercials. I hope that helps. Good luck with it. And welcome!
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:51 am
by Satish
cardell wrote:Welcome Satish,
I enjoyed that
but...I found the static sound at the start quite distracting. It sounds like it is intentional but to me it sounds bad.
Stuart
Hi Stuart, Thanks for the constructive criticism. I did think that myself after posting it for the deadline... i joined taxi a day before the due date and couldn't make that judgement call in my rush. Thanks again. CHeers, Satish/..
Re: Another oily oily submission!!!
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:54 am
by Satish
Hi all,
Thanks for all the positive comments you guys. Really appreciate you all taking the time out to listen. I heard all your submissions too and some fabulous stuff for this listing. Best of luck to all you as well. Cheers, Satish/..