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Feedback Appreciated On 2 Tunes - Car Comm. & Rock Listing

Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 8:39 pm
by Mark Riley
Hey guys,

First time post here. I'm just hoping to get some feedback on a couple of tunes....

The first one was for a recent car listing - : Y110313IN - the tune I submitted is called "Rush".

The second one is for a rock listing - : S110317RK - and that tune is called "I Guess This Is Goodbye"

Thanks in advance for any constructive input !

http://www.reverbnation.com/markrileyonline

Re: Feedback Appreciated On 2 Tunes - Car Comm. & Rock Listing

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:51 am
by Mark Riley
Bump.

Re: Feedback Appreciated On 2 Tunes - Car Comm. & Rock Listing

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 12:01 pm
by theoldman
Hi Mark - Also my first post.

I'm a little short on suggestions for your tracks, cuz I liked both of them just as they are.

Nicely done, sir.

JT

Re: Feedback Appreciated On 2 Tunes - Car Comm. & Rock Listing

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 12:19 pm
by thokus
Hey Mark,

Loved the Rush .. Loved how it built into the big rock sound.. Sounds clear and crisp.. Great job ..
The other one "I guess it's goodbye" ..didnt like that one one as much .. Mainly because I'm not a lyrics kinda guy .. Love the instrumentals.. It seemed after the singing started the guitars, drums and everything lost its punch. I think you need to keep that punch, even with the lower volume (dynamics).. It kinda built back up as the song kept goin. around 1:35 I noticed the kick drum came back boomin a little more which made it good. You do have a nice gritty voice .. Sounds real nice.. My two cents .. Good luck with them both ..
Tom

Re: Feedback Appreciated On 2 Tunes - Car Comm. & Rock Listing

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:55 pm
by Mark Riley
Thanks for the feedback man, much appreciated.

Re: Feedback Appreciated On 2 Tunes - Car Comm. & Rock Listing

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:04 pm
by DesireeBowen
Hi Mark!

Really enjoyed Rush- sounds great for a car commercial.

I Guess This is Goodbye had a real nice upbeat feel to it. I am certainly not a production expert, but to me it could use a little more work in that area. Nice voice!

Re: Feedback Appreciated On 2 Tunes - Car Comm. & Rock Listing

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 10:11 pm
by Mark Riley
Thank you for the input Desiree, much appreciated and duly noted.