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A brand new song from me.
Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 2:15 pm
by Ellwood
It's titled Cider Mill, hope you like it.....
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11018723
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 3:52 pm
by bucyboy
Hi Ellwood. I like the groove of this. Is it possible to post the lyric for this too? It helps me to read the lyric to make any real detailed feedback. What were you thinking about doing with this one? Didn't know if you had an artist in mind or were leaning toward TV/film. Nice job,
Buc
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:47 pm
by Ellwood
Hey Buc, thanks, not sure what to do with the song really? maybe for a artist? Here are the lyrics..... (Lyrics removed 09/05)
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:54 am
by sedge
Hi Lee, flows real well!
Poss Peer2Peer crit from me,
Drums , maybe I would have them a bit drier? (think that is what I mean ) They sound a little verby/set back ?7
Probally a personal taste thing from me though!
Rob
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:49 am
by majorshadow21
Upbeat tempo,unique melody, and relatable topic! Love this!
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:51 am
by Ellwood
Thanks Major!! I appreciate it.... Lee
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2011 4:42 pm
by Ellwood
sedge wrote:Hi Lee, flows real well!
Poss Peer2Peer crit from me,
Drums , maybe I would have them a bit drier? (think that is what I mean ) They sound a little verby/set back ?7
Probally a personal taste thing from me though!
Rob
Thanks Sedge... now do you think it's room mic reverb tail OR added in reverb plug in is too much???
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2011 7:20 pm
by playagibson
Hey Elwood,
Great song !
The room mike is a little too prominent to me. The snare is a little lost. A closer drum sound will sit better to me.
The harmony " Lets go to Cider Mill " is a bit pitchy ( flat ) to my ears, also the next line is a little pitchy as well.
It might be a good idea to work out the harmonies on piano or guitar.
The guitars and the Dobro slide sound perfect, especially the Dobro. I love the sound of that thing.
Cheers !
Rich.
ps; Which EZD program is that ? I like the hi hat groove.
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2011 8:00 pm
by Ellwood
Thanks Rich! ok will check that vocal.. I think that was the Nashville Kit on that track..
Re: A brand new song from me.
Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 6:57 am
by marcblack30
Hey Lee, cool tune! This would be a good tune to try out the Americana EZX! I would simplify the drum fill around the 9 sec mark, and the line "kept the fire burning baby" at 2:46 the phrasing sounds a bit awkward. Not that crazy about the organ patch, might be a little too distorted and it sounds a little thin to my ears. Overall, really like the tune and think with some minor tweaks it'll be sounding better.
Marc