Can I Be Serious? by No Chance Milly. New version

[Graeme Lang]

Hello all! Happy Sunday to you whereever you may be!

Just uploaded a new version of my track "Can I Be Serious?" to Soundcloud.

http://soundcloud.com/nochancemilly/can-i-be-serious

Opinions welcomed!

Cheers

[sedge]

Hi Graeme, hope your well. Welcome to the forum!

I like the rounded sound, there is a retro feel to it, early 90s poss. for me that is great, like an almost ballady version of The Happy Mondays.

Main thing to spring out to me were the words.
I didn't really understand them!!??.

I might just have my head on wrong way today

Lines like..

They’ve got no class
They’re under glass

They’re throwing stones at the stars

but we don't know who, what your talking to, or the why .. kinda thing?

I didn't feel a message as such??

that's just me though, might be being a bit dumb here

hope you get some more thoughts from others too, lots of great ears here, I think it's a little post road rally quiet at the mo.

Kind Regards,
Rob

[Graeme Lang]

Hi Sedge

Thanks for the feedback and the words of welcome. Much appreciated.

The under glass/throwing stones line is a sort of variation on the "people in glass houses" proverb, Its a bit vague but its about people criticising and being unable to see their own faults and one feeling cut adrift and constantly on guard when surrounded by the darkness of hostility and falsehood.... I hope that didn't sound too pretentious!