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Trying to learn from these returns but am not quite seeing what the screener means... thoughts?

https://soundcloud.com/davidhollandsworth/fluid "Could have better top line tones. Could be more emotionally compelling."

https://soundcloud.com/davidhollandsworth/liquid-air "Could be a better tone meld in general and more engaging overall."

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I'm with you my friend. Wondering if anyone got a forward for this one. I got two returns...

https://soundcloud.com/paulcroteau/equanimity
"Nice ideas but could be more sonically cohesive at the bottom end."

https://soundcloud.com/paulcroteau/converged
"Good opening sequence but some of the top line tones could be better I believe."

Vagueness like this is why we need some basic musical training or at a minimum a standard vocabulary for the screeners to work with. Does "top line tones" mean a more prevalent melodic motif, or is the screener referring to the type or timbre of the lead patches themselves?

Does "sonically cohesive" refer to a mixing situation with overlapping frequencies, or is it an ask for melodic or pattern movement from a bass patch?

I actually emailed the head screener on this listing. NOT asking for a forward, but asking for a better understanding of my feedback, whether or not the A La or the listing text is more important, and whether or not the screener listened to the A La's. (some have admitted to not listening to A La's if they know the artist or genre). RED FLAG for me.

I hope to hear back, good feedback is so helpful. Vague feedback makes me want to stop submitting.

Glad you wrote the head screener cuz I'd sure like to know, too!

Similar feedback on my 2 returns...elements in one needed to be more "sonically focused" and the other cue was "not quite cohesive and compelling enough." On the plus side, there were positive comments on my piano playing .

It seems like there were 0 forwards for this listing. Don't see any on the forwards page.

It was a Dispatch listing which, unfortunately, don't show up on the forwards blog.

Ah ok. Makes sense. I didn't post for this one but was curious..thanks

I also got a return for this one, I was also a little disappointed with the comments.. I don't really understand.

"Like the style but the piece could have a more solid emotional focus for a listing like this one I believe. Interesting work though!"


my cue:

www.soundcloud.com/markhimley/what-have-we-done

what is the forwards blog/page?