Need help in understanding a listing return.
Posted: Wed May 15, 2019 7:24 am
HI All,
I've been a Taxi member for a couple years now and had more forwards than returns and some success. When I do get returned, I usually can see the reviewers point and use the critique constructively in the spirit it was intended.
This one, however, has got me baffled, I would love your thoughts.
The listing was...."ORIGINAL SURF ROCK INSTRUMENTALS are needed for a several $4,500, NON-Exclusive, Direct-to-Music Supervisor placements in an Action Adventure Fantasy TV Series. This Music Supervisor needs Guitar-Driven, Mid-to-Up-Tempo Instrumentals that would fit on a playlist with these references, which the Music Supervisor gave us:
“Miserlou” by Dick Dale
“Wipe Out” by Surfaris
“Pipeline” by The Chantays"
What is submitted was
https://soundcloud.com/john-vanhoudt/grab-yer-board
The return was "Stylistically Off Target" and "This piece feels too repetitious for this project. The composition needed more changes to add complexity and dynamics to the track overall."
I'm curious of your thoughts
Thank you so much
John Van Houdt
I've been a Taxi member for a couple years now and had more forwards than returns and some success. When I do get returned, I usually can see the reviewers point and use the critique constructively in the spirit it was intended.
This one, however, has got me baffled, I would love your thoughts.
The listing was...."ORIGINAL SURF ROCK INSTRUMENTALS are needed for a several $4,500, NON-Exclusive, Direct-to-Music Supervisor placements in an Action Adventure Fantasy TV Series. This Music Supervisor needs Guitar-Driven, Mid-to-Up-Tempo Instrumentals that would fit on a playlist with these references, which the Music Supervisor gave us:
“Miserlou” by Dick Dale
“Wipe Out” by Surfaris
“Pipeline” by The Chantays"
What is submitted was
https://soundcloud.com/john-vanhoudt/grab-yer-board
The return was "Stylistically Off Target" and "This piece feels too repetitious for this project. The composition needed more changes to add complexity and dynamics to the track overall."
I'm curious of your thoughts
Thank you so much
John Van Houdt