Help me!
Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2024 4:06 pm
Dear friends, just got a return for this listing:
Lots of POP/PUNK SONGS with FEMALE vocals are needed by a super well-connected Film/TV Music Publisher for specific placement opportunities on a long running Television Series!
This Company is looking for a bunch of Up-Tempo Songs in the general wheelhouse of the following references:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hrk6R7W ... totblondie
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7Eqo7V ... neyRevenge
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__KlXUv ... =Pinkshift
NOTE: This Publisher is looking for new, current-sounding Female-fronted Pop/Punk Bands that want to get their music out there! They are also open to hearing really great Songs from the '80s, '90s, or early 2000's as well... as long as they have that Punk sound and a female singer!
Please submit Pop/Punk Songs bursting with tons of energy that showcase a talented Female singer. Ear-worm hooks, unforgettable melodies, driving rhythms, rockin' guitars, well-crafted lyrics, and confident, well-performed vocals are all needed for this request. Typical Pop/Punk instrumentation (think big guitars, drums, bass, etc.) that falls in the general wheelhouse of the references will work best for this opportunity. Please be sure that any virtual sounds or samples you use are realistic and sound like the real thing.
My song:
https://www.taxi.com/members/WJQg0yIBTr ... er-than-me
Review:
What I like most about this song
I like verse melody and drive on this tune.
I think you could improve this song by
The lyric hook connects well, but chorus melody could reach into more infectious territory for this request. A thought would be some top line finesse for more stand out qualities.
I returned or forwarded this song because
The chorus could reach more stand out territory for this request.
So...
It's a punk song but the screener want more finesse in the chorus.
Please, what should I do with the chorus?
Work on the backing vocals, try a different vocal line, change lyrics?
Any feedback is appreciated.
Thanks!
Lots of POP/PUNK SONGS with FEMALE vocals are needed by a super well-connected Film/TV Music Publisher for specific placement opportunities on a long running Television Series!
This Company is looking for a bunch of Up-Tempo Songs in the general wheelhouse of the following references:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hrk6R7W ... totblondie
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7Eqo7V ... neyRevenge
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__KlXUv ... =Pinkshift
NOTE: This Publisher is looking for new, current-sounding Female-fronted Pop/Punk Bands that want to get their music out there! They are also open to hearing really great Songs from the '80s, '90s, or early 2000's as well... as long as they have that Punk sound and a female singer!
Please submit Pop/Punk Songs bursting with tons of energy that showcase a talented Female singer. Ear-worm hooks, unforgettable melodies, driving rhythms, rockin' guitars, well-crafted lyrics, and confident, well-performed vocals are all needed for this request. Typical Pop/Punk instrumentation (think big guitars, drums, bass, etc.) that falls in the general wheelhouse of the references will work best for this opportunity. Please be sure that any virtual sounds or samples you use are realistic and sound like the real thing.
My song:
https://www.taxi.com/members/WJQg0yIBTr ... er-than-me
Review:
What I like most about this song
I like verse melody and drive on this tune.
I think you could improve this song by
The lyric hook connects well, but chorus melody could reach into more infectious territory for this request. A thought would be some top line finesse for more stand out qualities.
I returned or forwarded this song because
The chorus could reach more stand out territory for this request.
So...
It's a punk song but the screener want more finesse in the chorus.
Please, what should I do with the chorus?
Work on the backing vocals, try a different vocal line, change lyrics?
Any feedback is appreciated.
Thanks!