I'm not trying to be negative...it's a positive thing in my mind to improve and constantly push forward. Isn't that what we're all here to do?
TAXI does great work...I send my kudos when appropriate. But these listings are often messy. Finding the details in these texts are the key to successful submissions.....that job is harder when it's a massive paragraph of jumbled text. A small thing that could be improved easily and could help us out. Why wouldn't TAXI want to do this if we all agree better formatted listings would help?
For me, I'm never looking at just one listing. I'm scanning a whole series of listings twice a month to find the ones that relate most to what I do. I'm also trying to figure out what listings are repeats, have I submitted to them before, do I have material now or could I write something in time, etc, etc. My mind is working overtime to make the best of these listings and my submission $$$$. The important parts of each listing should be easy to read.
Here's an example. The first block of text is TAXI's current ad. The 2nd is my formatted version....the text has not been changed...just formatted. Which is easier to find the important points of the ad?
New Listing HEARTFELT, ADULT CONTEMPORARY SONGS with Male Vocals are needed by a Major Record Label for Multi-Platinum, Chart-topping Superstar that's looking for great songs for his next album. They're looking hard to find vocally powerful, Down-to-Mid-Tempo Songs that could be found on the same playlists as artists like:Josh Groban:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aJxrX42WcjQMichael Buble:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Edwsf-8F3sIRussell Watson:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x2oO558MPUkPlease submit well-crafted songs with meaningful lyrics, a great melody, and a big chorus that sounds like it's ready for radio. Please avoid overly moody or dated sounding songs for this one. The more uplifting and inspirational the better! Your overall production should be really solid to sell them on the idea of cutting your song. Please submit one to three Songs online or per CD, include lyrics. All submissions will be screened and critiqued by TAXI and must be received no later than 11:59PM (PST), on Wednesday, March 16th, 2016. TAXI #S160316AC
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New Listing: HEARTFELT, ADULT CONTEMPORARY SONGS with Male Vocals are needed by a Major Record Label for Multi-Platinum, Chart-topping Superstar that's looking for great songs for his next album.
They're looking hard to find vocally powerful, Down-to-Mid-Tempo Songs that could be found on the same playlists as artists like:
Josh Groban:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aJxrX42WcjQ
Michael Buble:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Edwsf-8F3sI
Russell Watson:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x2oO558MPUk
Please submit well-crafted songs with meaningful lyrics, a great melody, and a big chorus that sounds like it's ready for radio. Please avoid overly moody or dated sounding songs for this one. The more uplifting and inspirational the better! Your overall production should be really solid to sell them on the idea of cutting your song.
Please submit one to three Songs online or per CD, include lyrics. All submissions will be screened and critiqued by TAXI and must be received no later than 11:59PM (PST), on Wednesday, March 16th, 2016. TAXI #S160316AC