I submitted this song and could really use some feedback on this stripped down version. Any critique welcome. Thank You.
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Singer/Songwriter entry; Feedback ?
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Re: Singer/Songwriter entry; Feedback ?
Hey Rockinrob!
Take this feedback with a grain of salt, as I'm an absolute newbie here. Joined Taxi on Saturday, and this is my very first post. =)
I really like the lyrics, and vocal of the song. Your voice has a great timbre, and emotional quality to it. Good song.
That said I do have two suggestions, from only a single listen, that stick out to me:
1) Record an acoustic vs electric, and bring your voice more up front than the guitar. I just hear a big acoustic with great chiming chords.
2) Have you considered playing it faster? Increasing the tempo could also have a different energy to the track.
At any rate, very enjoyable!
Brad
Take this feedback with a grain of salt, as I'm an absolute newbie here. Joined Taxi on Saturday, and this is my very first post. =)
I really like the lyrics, and vocal of the song. Your voice has a great timbre, and emotional quality to it. Good song.
That said I do have two suggestions, from only a single listen, that stick out to me:
1) Record an acoustic vs electric, and bring your voice more up front than the guitar. I just hear a big acoustic with great chiming chords.
2) Have you considered playing it faster? Increasing the tempo could also have a different energy to the track.
At any rate, very enjoyable!
Brad
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