JAPANESE-Flavored EDM INSTRUMENTALS # S241108PD Cringe worthy? What do you think?
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 11:44 am
I sent the Head Screener email about how I think the descriptions are cringe, what do you think?:
"Hi,
Lots of PIANO-Driven, JAPANESE-Flavored EDM INSTRUMENTALS # S241108PD
"Please submit well-crafted Japanese-flavored EDM Instrumentals (and/or Cues) with a piano-driven sound and lots of over-the-top energy! Your submissions should have fun melodies, fast-paced rhythms, and jazz-influenced compositions (think non-diatonic changes, modal melodies, etc)."
Yes, I wonder if whom ever comes up with descriptions knows what they are talking about. How are the references considered "Japanese-flavored" what does that actually mean? I would have expected a Japanese flute or some other traditional Japanese instrument. If I heard these pieces not knowing they are from Japanese artists I wouldn't know they were Japanese artists.
Also, the references are anything but "non-diatonic changes and modal melodies". I wish you guys would stop with the cringe boiler plate descriptions. Let the reference tracks speak for them selves.
Unless someone is a total newbie at songwriting and producing, saying stuff like "Powerful choruses, catchy hooks, emotionally captivating motifs, solid arrangements, and well-performed vocals", etc. comes across as talking down to your subscribers, I know that is not your intention but it rubs me and probably other serious producers/songwriters the wrong way.
If we get a Return, that's what the critiques are for to address the details.
Thanks for listening.
John"
"Hi,
Lots of PIANO-Driven, JAPANESE-Flavored EDM INSTRUMENTALS # S241108PD
"Please submit well-crafted Japanese-flavored EDM Instrumentals (and/or Cues) with a piano-driven sound and lots of over-the-top energy! Your submissions should have fun melodies, fast-paced rhythms, and jazz-influenced compositions (think non-diatonic changes, modal melodies, etc)."
Yes, I wonder if whom ever comes up with descriptions knows what they are talking about. How are the references considered "Japanese-flavored" what does that actually mean? I would have expected a Japanese flute or some other traditional Japanese instrument. If I heard these pieces not knowing they are from Japanese artists I wouldn't know they were Japanese artists.
Also, the references are anything but "non-diatonic changes and modal melodies". I wish you guys would stop with the cringe boiler plate descriptions. Let the reference tracks speak for them selves.
Unless someone is a total newbie at songwriting and producing, saying stuff like "Powerful choruses, catchy hooks, emotionally captivating motifs, solid arrangements, and well-performed vocals", etc. comes across as talking down to your subscribers, I know that is not your intention but it rubs me and probably other serious producers/songwriters the wrong way.
If we get a Return, that's what the critiques are for to address the details.
Thanks for listening.
John"