Found the right place! Possible country song?

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Found the right place! Possible country song?

Post by mikeymike2000 » Fri Apr 12, 2013 2:03 pm

A nameless song, another exercise but this is much more complete than my previous post. If you hear a current melody in there and/or have some ideas to get rid of the cliche 'walk down the aisle' part, please send me a note and we can finish this puppy off.

Verse
Another long day I'm on my way
can't wait to see your sparkling eyes
I'll hold you close I'll hold you tight
And wrap myself in your love tonight

verse
I see you there walking on air
You’re the only one that I admire
Just sit right down give me some time
And let me know that you are mine

chorus
So baby take my hand and walk with me a while
And promise me that you will never say goodbye
All I need is You to make this all worthwhile
Please take my hand and walk down the aisle with me

Verse
Now I don't know where the road may go
But with you with me every mile
when I'm with you there is no pain
your love washes me like the rain


verse
Let’s trip away to paradise and stay
We’ll go to our favorite spot
I give my word you give your heart
Together we make a fresh start

chorus
So baby take my hand and walk with me a while
And promise me that you will never say goodbye
All I need is You to make this all worthwhile
Please take my hand and walk down the aisle with me


bridge
(Instrumental at the moment)

chorus
So baby take my hand and walk with me a while
And promise me that you will never say goodbye
All I need is You to make this all worthwhile
Please take this ring and walk down the aisle with me
Walk down the aisle with me

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Re: Found the right place! Possible country song?

Post by inga » Fri Apr 12, 2013 2:32 pm

A nameless song. Oh the little orphan. Enough to make you weep so tis.

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Re: Found the right place! Possible country song?

Post by mikeymike2000 » Fri Apr 12, 2013 3:36 pm

inga wrote:A nameless song. Oh the little orphan. Enough to make you weep so tis.
:lol:

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