Re: The Battle Cry
Posted: Thu May 07, 2015 1:26 pm
Hi Jolan,
Thanks for sharing! I vote for "I will stand in front not behind" for the second line and "So let bullets fly" for the third.
I really like the chorus though I would change "shot in the behind" to "shot from behind"
In Verse 2, I think the first two lines are redundant as you've already explained that you fight for what you believe in and how you choose to live your life.
Hope this helps!
Elizabeth
Thanks for sharing! I vote for "I will stand in front not behind" for the second line and "So let bullets fly" for the third.
I really like the chorus though I would change "shot in the behind" to "shot from behind"
In Verse 2, I think the first two lines are redundant as you've already explained that you fight for what you believe in and how you choose to live your life.
Hope this helps!
Elizabeth