Home Before Midnight (Could This Be a Hit?)
Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2020 8:43 pm
Please have a read of my lyric and a listen to my song below; Comments and suggests are welcome. I am seeking (Musician/vocals) collaborative help.
https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/hom ... midnight-1
Home before Midnight
©2020 Irwin Abrigo
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(Verse 1)
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It’s an hour away from midnight
I try to call you kelp hanging up your phone
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come home
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Verse 2)
I Know I’d ever told you a lie
If there was something I’d done you didn’t like
You know you could have told me I was wrong
Been together so long
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
-
(Verse/Bridge)
Your friends hadn’t seen you all day long
Never slept a night from each other’s arms
Rumors’ been going around has I understand
You’ve been seen down- town walking holding hands with another man
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
-
(Bridge)
I want to hold you in these arms of mine tonight
Oh baby please don’t make me cry
-
(Chorus)
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
Come home
Come home
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This was a earlier Post
Hi Member,
I have rewritten this lyric after reading Mark's advice. Also I've done a scratch vocal of the melody. Please have a read and listen below; Comments and suggests are welcome. I am seeking collaborative help.
https://soundcloud.com/user-148093629/h ... e-midnight
Home before Midnight----------BPM-140 Date; July 31, 2020
©2020 Irwin Abrigo--------------D Minor
-
(Verse 1)
-
It’s an hour away from midnight
I try to call you kelp hanging up your phone
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come home
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Verse 2)
I Know I’d ever told you a lie
If there was something I’d done you didn’t like
You know you could have told me I was wrong
Been together for so long
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
-
(Bridge)
Your friends hadn’t seen you all day long
Never slept a night from each other’s arms
Rumors’ been going around has I understand
You’ve been seen down- town walking holding hands with another man
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
-
(Verse 3)
I want to hold you in these arms of mine tonight
Oh baby please don’t make me cry
-
(Chorus)
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
Come home
Come home
THIS WAS THE FIRST POST BELOW:
I present this song lyric of mine for review. I Thought to myself I did a good job but that's only me.
I am looking forward for some serious, and to be critically reviewed
Home Before Midnight
©2020 Irwin Abrigo
-
(Verse 1)
I’m looking out the window sitting with my phone
Waiting for you to come back home
Been drinking all the while, setting up all night
I couldn’t get you off my mind
It’s an hour away from midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
Tonight I don't wanna sleep alone
-
(Verse 2)
I’d been trying to call you hanging at the malls
Friends hadn’t seen you all day long
If there was something I’d done
you Thought I was wrong
You Know I'd never told you a lie
Never slept a night from each other’s arms
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
Tonight I don't wanna sleep alone
-
(Chorus)
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
(Pre Bridge)
I want, to hold you, in these, arms of mine
Baby, please don’t, please don’t make me cry
Tonight
-
(Bridge)
I don't wanna sleep alone, tonight It’s almost midnight
Rumors’ been going around town, you’ve been seeing another guy
I don't want to be alone
Please don't make me sleep, alone
-
(Chorus)
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I wanna you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/hom ... midnight-1
Home before Midnight
©2020 Irwin Abrigo
-
(Verse 1)
-
It’s an hour away from midnight
I try to call you kelp hanging up your phone
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come home
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Verse 2)
I Know I’d ever told you a lie
If there was something I’d done you didn’t like
You know you could have told me I was wrong
Been together so long
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
-
(Verse/Bridge)
Your friends hadn’t seen you all day long
Never slept a night from each other’s arms
Rumors’ been going around has I understand
You’ve been seen down- town walking holding hands with another man
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
-
(Bridge)
I want to hold you in these arms of mine tonight
Oh baby please don’t make me cry
-
(Chorus)
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
Come home
Come home
//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
This was a earlier Post
Hi Member,
I have rewritten this lyric after reading Mark's advice. Also I've done a scratch vocal of the melody. Please have a read and listen below; Comments and suggests are welcome. I am seeking collaborative help.
https://soundcloud.com/user-148093629/h ... e-midnight
Home before Midnight----------BPM-140 Date; July 31, 2020
©2020 Irwin Abrigo--------------D Minor
-
(Verse 1)
-
It’s an hour away from midnight
I try to call you kelp hanging up your phone
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come home
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Verse 2)
I Know I’d ever told you a lie
If there was something I’d done you didn’t like
You know you could have told me I was wrong
Been together for so long
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
-
(Bridge)
Your friends hadn’t seen you all day long
Never slept a night from each other’s arms
Rumors’ been going around has I understand
You’ve been seen down- town walking holding hands with another man
-
Come home
Come home
-
(Chorus) x2
-
(Verse 3)
I want to hold you in these arms of mine tonight
Oh baby please don’t make me cry
-
(Chorus)
I want you to come home
Before midnight, before midnight
Come home
Come home
THIS WAS THE FIRST POST BELOW:
I present this song lyric of mine for review. I Thought to myself I did a good job but that's only me.
I am looking forward for some serious, and to be critically reviewed
Home Before Midnight
©2020 Irwin Abrigo
-
(Verse 1)
I’m looking out the window sitting with my phone
Waiting for you to come back home
Been drinking all the while, setting up all night
I couldn’t get you off my mind
It’s an hour away from midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
Tonight I don't wanna sleep alone
-
(Verse 2)
I’d been trying to call you hanging at the malls
Friends hadn’t seen you all day long
If there was something I’d done
you Thought I was wrong
You Know I'd never told you a lie
Never slept a night from each other’s arms
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
Tonight I don't wanna sleep alone
-
(Chorus)
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
(Pre Bridge)
I want, to hold you, in these, arms of mine
Baby, please don’t, please don’t make me cry
Tonight
-
(Bridge)
I don't wanna sleep alone, tonight It’s almost midnight
Rumors’ been going around town, you’ve been seeing another guy
I don't want to be alone
Please don't make me sleep, alone
-
(Chorus)
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I wanna you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight
I don't wanna sleep alone tonight
I want you to come back home before midnight