Need feedback on the lyrics please !
Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2021 8:14 pm
Titles
Damn I want off this ride
Dang I want off this ride
Sitting here wondering just what to do
Something's gotta change
I've been living my life on the very edge
Like hell on a rampant trek
It's been one thing after another
Ain't nothing worked out yet
First I'm up and feelin good
Then I'm down and bouncing again
(pause)
Damn! I want off this ride! (chorus)
Sometimes I see the light at the end
And wonder how far it is
Then the Devil puts a block in my path
So I stumble and fall again
Feel like I'm hitting my head on the wall
But it only makes me feel worse
Can I lay here awhile and rest my bones
I'm feelin a mighty thirst
Damn! I want off this ride!
Took a ride on a Ferris wheel and
Thought I was taking a plane
Round and round and up and down
I feel like a toy yoyo.
Can someone please pull the plug on this thing
I'm feeling a little sick
Damn! I want off this ride!
Hey! Someone turn the lights back on!
I can't see a doggone thing!
chorus
Jam to the end and make funny verbal comments be during jam
End with
Damn! I want off this ride!
It's a rather fast tempo and only has 2 chords for the whole song
Critique Away!
Thanks
Damn I want off this ride
Dang I want off this ride
Sitting here wondering just what to do
Something's gotta change
I've been living my life on the very edge
Like hell on a rampant trek
It's been one thing after another
Ain't nothing worked out yet
First I'm up and feelin good
Then I'm down and bouncing again
(pause)
Damn! I want off this ride! (chorus)
Sometimes I see the light at the end
And wonder how far it is
Then the Devil puts a block in my path
So I stumble and fall again
Feel like I'm hitting my head on the wall
But it only makes me feel worse
Can I lay here awhile and rest my bones
I'm feelin a mighty thirst
Damn! I want off this ride!
Took a ride on a Ferris wheel and
Thought I was taking a plane
Round and round and up and down
I feel like a toy yoyo.
Can someone please pull the plug on this thing
I'm feeling a little sick
Damn! I want off this ride!
Hey! Someone turn the lights back on!
I can't see a doggone thing!
chorus
Jam to the end and make funny verbal comments be during jam
End with
Damn! I want off this ride!
It's a rather fast tempo and only has 2 chords for the whole song
Critique Away!
Thanks