Need advice on lyrics
Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2021 8:50 am
I haven't been on this site for a while, but I decided to give up writing melodies for songs and try and give 100% to lyrics. I always felt I was stuck in my past as far as melodies went. Anyway, any advice on this song would be appreciated.
Tom
You Breathe Life Into Me
I've been feeling cold, like I'm six feet deep
Love is feelin so remote, I can't rest in peace
You have come and raised me up, from this frozen sleep
All you had to do was breathe
Chorus
Yeah, I feel it now, my heart is starting to beat
Bodies warmin as you breathe new life into me
My blood is racin, like a mad mob loose in the street
Now I know you're all I need
You breathe life into me, and it all comes alive
Every color that I see, I never saw with these eyes
Things were getting kind of black, just before my demise
Now I'mma sighin with relief
You breathe life into me
Ooh ooh, ooh ooh
You breathe life into me
Ooh ohh, ooh ooh
You breathe life into me
I resigned to endless nights, wasted in the dark
Tryin to find a little light, in a strangers heart
I was always on the edge, and it was so sharp
Then you took me in your arms
Chorus
Bridge
Life's an uncertain dance
But one thing I know for sure
You are my second chance
You are my only cure
Chorus...end.
Tom
You Breathe Life Into Me
I've been feeling cold, like I'm six feet deep
Love is feelin so remote, I can't rest in peace
You have come and raised me up, from this frozen sleep
All you had to do was breathe
Chorus
Yeah, I feel it now, my heart is starting to beat
Bodies warmin as you breathe new life into me
My blood is racin, like a mad mob loose in the street
Now I know you're all I need
You breathe life into me, and it all comes alive
Every color that I see, I never saw with these eyes
Things were getting kind of black, just before my demise
Now I'mma sighin with relief
You breathe life into me
Ooh ooh, ooh ooh
You breathe life into me
Ooh ohh, ooh ooh
You breathe life into me
I resigned to endless nights, wasted in the dark
Tryin to find a little light, in a strangers heart
I was always on the edge, and it was so sharp
Then you took me in your arms
Chorus
Bridge
Life's an uncertain dance
But one thing I know for sure
You are my second chance
You are my only cure
Chorus...end.