"Party Time Once Again"
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2022 2:45 pm
This is my first time posting on TAXI.
>>>====> NOTE: I completed a bunch more enhancements based on the great input you folks are giving me.
I'm always looking for constructive criticisms, you won't hurt my feelings.
I update the "REVISION xxxxxx" so you can see if it has changed since the last time you looked.
I know it is too long, but that will be the last thing I change after implementing other suggestions that I may get. <====<<<
Please provide me with some feedback on these lyrics.
Thank You,
Jerry Taylor
"Party Time Once Again" is a true story of a man who meets his true love. Then his country sends him across the sea while in the ARMY. When he returns, he finds his true love has found another flame and he starts drinking and partying, trying to forget his true love, but no matter how much partying he does, he can't forget.
Title: "Party Time Once Again"
Genre: Folk Country Blues Balad
Three chords and the truth = Chords E F# B
Lyrics by: Jerry Taylor (2022)
I can't play, I can't sing so the SoundCloud link is just to a very rough "EXAMPLE" of how the Lyrics could be used if someone who can actually sing and play would use the lyrics.
The link to SoundCloud is here:
NOTE: jlt aka Chucky Chopper
https://soundcloud.com/user-698453702/p ... once-again
FOURTH REVISION:
Well it's party time, party time once again
I've been to so many I don't even know where I am
I must party time to forget my only true love
She's the sweetest girl from heaven up above
My country sent me way 'cross the pond
For many months, many months I wasn't around
And when I returned life just wasn't the same
My only true love found herself a new flame
You see she left me when I was away
And I'll regret it, I'll regret it till my dying day
So I try to forget her by having party time
So please fill my glass up one more time
>>>Oh how can I make this loneliness end
>>> Yea I'll never be with her, I'll never be with her again
(>>>====> BRIDGE BEGIN <====<<<) B F# E
I used to enjoy all of her charms
Now she's giving them in another man's arms
did everything I could do to make her stay
I never thought I'd see this dismal day
(>>>====> BRIDGE END <====<<<)
She was the sweetest girl before I left
Yea the one that I never wanted to forget
if you see tears, if you see tears please don't ask
And if you see my glass is empty, just fill it up fast
>>>Oh how can I make this loneliness end
>>>Yea I'll never be with her, I'll never be with her again
I do know that I miss her now and then
But I really miss her a lot more now than then
Yea I miss her, I miss her more now than then
So my friends let's really party time again
So it's party time, party time once again
Since my love told me, she told me it's the end
So my friends let's party time, once again
And I don't even care, I don't even care where I am
Oh how can I make this loneliness end
Yea I'll never be with her, I'll never be with her again
Oh how can I make this loneliness ever end
Just knowing I'll never be with her again
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>>>====> NOTE: I completed a bunch more enhancements based on the great input you folks are giving me.
I'm always looking for constructive criticisms, you won't hurt my feelings.
I update the "REVISION xxxxxx" so you can see if it has changed since the last time you looked.
I know it is too long, but that will be the last thing I change after implementing other suggestions that I may get. <====<<<
Please provide me with some feedback on these lyrics.
Thank You,
Jerry Taylor
"Party Time Once Again" is a true story of a man who meets his true love. Then his country sends him across the sea while in the ARMY. When he returns, he finds his true love has found another flame and he starts drinking and partying, trying to forget his true love, but no matter how much partying he does, he can't forget.
Title: "Party Time Once Again"
Genre: Folk Country Blues Balad
Three chords and the truth = Chords E F# B
Lyrics by: Jerry Taylor (2022)
I can't play, I can't sing so the SoundCloud link is just to a very rough "EXAMPLE" of how the Lyrics could be used if someone who can actually sing and play would use the lyrics.
The link to SoundCloud is here:
NOTE: jlt aka Chucky Chopper
https://soundcloud.com/user-698453702/p ... once-again
FOURTH REVISION:
Well it's party time, party time once again
I've been to so many I don't even know where I am
I must party time to forget my only true love
She's the sweetest girl from heaven up above
My country sent me way 'cross the pond
For many months, many months I wasn't around
And when I returned life just wasn't the same
My only true love found herself a new flame
You see she left me when I was away
And I'll regret it, I'll regret it till my dying day
So I try to forget her by having party time
So please fill my glass up one more time
>>>Oh how can I make this loneliness end
>>> Yea I'll never be with her, I'll never be with her again
(>>>====> BRIDGE BEGIN <====<<<) B F# E
I used to enjoy all of her charms
Now she's giving them in another man's arms
did everything I could do to make her stay
I never thought I'd see this dismal day
(>>>====> BRIDGE END <====<<<)
She was the sweetest girl before I left
Yea the one that I never wanted to forget
if you see tears, if you see tears please don't ask
And if you see my glass is empty, just fill it up fast
>>>Oh how can I make this loneliness end
>>>Yea I'll never be with her, I'll never be with her again
I do know that I miss her now and then
But I really miss her a lot more now than then
Yea I miss her, I miss her more now than then
So my friends let's really party time again
So it's party time, party time once again
Since my love told me, she told me it's the end
So my friends let's party time, once again
And I don't even care, I don't even care where I am
Oh how can I make this loneliness end
Yea I'll never be with her, I'll never be with her again
Oh how can I make this loneliness ever end
Just knowing I'll never be with her again
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