Heartfelt Singer-Songwriter Tune
Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2023 8:15 am
These lyrics were written yesterday for the current listing here:
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S231112AC
Curious if the style/structure of lyric writing lines up with contemporary singer/songwriter,
and am open to any feedback esp. regarding any lyrics that seem dated,
since I'm learning to write for modern briefs.
Verse1
The day is long done
Watch the setting sun
Melting softly on the waves
Chorus1
I know you’ll be here with me
You showed me how much fun
Together’s gonna be
I don’t know where I’m goin’
But I belong to you
And that’s all I need to know
It’s all I know
Verse2
I feel a little less young
Our naïve days are gone
But the world outside can wait
Chorus2
We’re not goin’ back to youth
The world we dreamed
Takes wide eyes to perceive
I foresee
A good life, with you here
Because you showed me
A thousand times before
You’ll be by my side
Whoa hooa, by my side
Bridge/Outro
When I barely knew you
How could I ever have thought of
All the love you’ve given
Weightless romance took wing
It’s you who flew to me
So come on
Let’s go away
Somewhere
Somewhere where we
Can be together
To play forever
Birds of a feather
Somewhere we feel free
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S231112AC
Curious if the style/structure of lyric writing lines up with contemporary singer/songwriter,
and am open to any feedback esp. regarding any lyrics that seem dated,
since I'm learning to write for modern briefs.
Verse1
The day is long done
Watch the setting sun
Melting softly on the waves
Chorus1
I know you’ll be here with me
You showed me how much fun
Together’s gonna be
I don’t know where I’m goin’
But I belong to you
And that’s all I need to know
It’s all I know
Verse2
I feel a little less young
Our naïve days are gone
But the world outside can wait
Chorus2
We’re not goin’ back to youth
The world we dreamed
Takes wide eyes to perceive
I foresee
A good life, with you here
Because you showed me
A thousand times before
You’ll be by my side
Whoa hooa, by my side
Bridge/Outro
When I barely knew you
How could I ever have thought of
All the love you’ve given
Weightless romance took wing
It’s you who flew to me
So come on
Let’s go away
Somewhere
Somewhere where we
Can be together
To play forever
Birds of a feather
Somewhere we feel free