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Good morning sunshine

Post by irwin » Wed Jun 11, 2008 2:32 am

Good morning sunshine©2008 Irwin Abrigo(Chorus)Good morning sunshineGood morning sunlightWill you shine all day long?Would you dry my tears today?Good morning sunlightGood morning sunshineWill you shine all day long?Would you dry my tears away?(Verse One)Winder as come and gone the nights were so longIt’s been a long time I haven’t seen the sunSpring is now around what are you waiting for?I can't stand being so lonelyThis morning I looked up to the skyI saw the sun it was shinning in disguiseAnd in my life I need the lightHow I was longing just to see it shine(Chorus)Good morning sunshineGood morning sunlightWill you shine all day long?Would you dry my tears today?Good morning sunlightGood morning sunshineWill you shine all day long?Would you dry my tears away?(Verse two)Can't you see I need you we’re so far apartMy love have left me with a broken heartI need to see her face to feel her warm embraceI wish I’d known what she thinkingCause this feeling there ain’t no healingOnly the sun can dry my tears awayI need love I need it nowAnd I was happy this morning just to see the sun(Repeat Chorus)

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Re: Good morning sunshine

Post by lwj001 » Wed Jun 11, 2008 8:06 pm

Howdy Irwin. Hope you don't mine a little editing.I standardized some of the line lengths, added some rhyming,and tried to get the tenses coordinated more closely:Good Morning Sunshine©2008 Irwin Abrigo(Chorus)Good morning sunshine =5Good morning sunlight =5Will you shine all day long =6Would you dry my tears today =7Good morning sunshine =5Good morning sunlight =5Will you right all the wrong =6 (breaks up a little of the repetition)Would you dry my tears away =7(Verse One)Winter has come and gone, the nights were so long =11It's been a long old time since I've seen the sun =11What were you waiting for, Spring is now around =11 (What are you waiting for - means the sun ain't here yet)And I can't stand being found the lonely one =11 (If you want to rhyme with sun)This morning I looked up to the skies =9The sun was shining with no disguise =9And in my life, I sure need the light =9How I was longing to see it shine =9(Chorus)Good morning sunshine =5Good morning sunlight =5Will you shine all day long =6Would you dry my tears today =7Good morning sunshine =5Good morning sunlight =5Will you right all the wrong =6Would you dry my tears away =7(Verse Two)Can't you see I need you, we’re so far apart =11Why, love, did you leave me with a broken heart =11I need to see your face, feel your warm embrace =11I wish I had known someone would take my place =11For this feeling, there ain't no healing =9To dry my tears, you're the only one =9I need love for a heart that's reeling =9This morning, it's good to see the sun =9(Chorus)Good morning sunshine =5Good morning sunlight =5Will you shine all day long =6Would you dry my tears today =7Good morning sunshine =5Good morning sunlight =5Will you right all the wrong =6Would you dry my tears away =7
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