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http://www.pic-a-pagediscounts.com/Real ... 3.htmlBlue Side Of The Track (Larry W. Jones 10/30/2006) (song#4108)This old town seems empty and coldEven the sky has turned to blackAll my dreams have been put on holdMy baby's on a new found track Every railroad track has two directionsNow, one goes forward, one goes backShe's on that new disappearin' sectionAnd I'm walkin' the blue side of the trackYeah, I'm walkin' the blue side of the trackStill tryin' to figure out what went wrongSomethin' tells me I'll never get her backWhen she left, she said I couldn't come alongYeah, I'm walkin' the blue side of the trackSomethin' tells me I'll never get her backThat girl was the center of my worldBut now my world is filled with painMy heart on her little finger was twirledBut she didn't linger for that outbound trainEvery railroad track has two directionsNow, one goes forward, one goes backShe's on that new disappearin' sectionAnd I'm walkin' the blue side of the trackI'm walkin' the blue side of the track

The title of this lyric drew me in. I've never seen it used before. The plot however did not live up to expectations. The metaphor here does not give a fresh original slant on this well worn topic. A title is vital but you need the theme to be working as well. Good start. Needs some tweeking......................peace!

http://www.pic-a-pagediscounts.com/Real ... htmlThanks oxe57. All comments are welcome. Here's one from my posting at "writingsongs.com"Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 7:28 pm Post subject: "i really love this, stellar job!!! Stacey"http://www.writingsongs.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=2974