rough worktape... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... 9Something That Meant Nothing(Cost Me Everything) (V1) She said it wasn't the motel receiptsor that I'd been workin' late for weeksor the long blonde hairs she found on my clothesit was because my kisses in the darkbegan to touch her lips but not her heartand that's how a woman always knows (PC) well, what could I do...I was guilty as could beso I the woman meant nuthin' to me (CHORUS) I once thought I had it allbut it was all for nothing and all my faultnow I'm brought to my knees with the memories midnight bringscos she wasn't bluffing and something that meant nothingcost me ev'rything (V2) I heard some foolish married friendssay, "enjoy your freedom-spare no expense'Cause she didn't take it all- she left plenty to spare She didn't want the house or Chevroletthe only way she planned to make me paywas to show me how cold they'd be without her there(PC) but when you're alone at night with all you've lostyou learn there's more to losing than just the cost (Chorus) I once thought I had it allbut it was all for nothing and all my faultnow I'm brought to my knees with the memories midnight bringscos she wasn't bluffing and something that meant nothingcost me ev'rything (Bridge) Yesterday my world revolved around my wifeand God help me now 'cause the circle of lifewas my wedding ringbut she wasn't bluffingand something that meant nothingcost me ev'rything .....cost me every thing..........cost me everything (c)2006 Joe Harris/Robert George
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Hey Couch I have to apologize. I associated you with lyrics only and didn't realize you collaborated for music too. You are quite the prolific lyricist, as we all know This song sounds pretty good. I love the lyrical theme. The only thing I would suggest is to cut down on the number of words. Less is more for a hit song. This is especially true for the chorus.How 'bout something along the lines of:(CHORUS) I once thought I had it allbut it was all for nothing now I'm brought to my knees with memories cos something that meant nothingcost me ev'rything Country is not my style so I could be way off here. But as you know, great songs are ones that say the most with the fewest words (e.g. "Fire and Rain")All the best! Maybe one day I'll have my own forum, LOL!!! Casey
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thanks for listening Casey! it all depends on the song...some tunes have long choruses(like the Good Stuff) others are shorter. what we have is pretty basic for country and fits with the music.
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Hey CG I hope it wasn't presumptuous of me to play around with your lyrics which are always excellent. Now that I know there is music I'll check out some more.All the best Casey
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Casey, not at all. stuff has always gotta be shuffled, dropped or added for the sake of the song. hope you like the music, too.
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