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Hi Sabrina,I like your song. It has a nice groove to it. I like these lines:THAT MOLE HILL'S NOW A MOUNTAINGROWING TALLER EVERY DAYJUST TRYING TO HOLD ME BACKAS I TRY TO GET AWAYWhat are your goals for your songwriting? Just for fun or do you want to be a performing artists yourself or do you want to write songs for other performing artists to sing or ....? If you tell us your goals, we can target the advice a little better.Dean

Sabrina,You should post this in the PEER TO PEER section. That is where song reviews go. You will get more people to help you there.When writing for other artists the common advice is: write in the style that is on the radio todaywrite a great hookgreat sectional differencebig lifted chorusmake a demo that sounds like it could play on the radiowrite in a standard format .. like vcvcbcGood luck.Dean