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Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 2:27 pm
by tedsingingfox
Everybody keeps telling me this is totally WASTED as an instrumental.Anybody feel up to giving lyrics for this a try? Me, personally, I'm terrified of trying to write lyrics that I believe to be equal to the beauty/emotional impact of this melody...'cause I ain't that good of a lyricist yet.Although I DO have a name I call this, I don't want to type it in here 'cause I don't want to influence the way you may hear/read the sound and mood of this.Thanks for taking a listen.Tedhttp://
www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_id=118177&stream=1ps. IF you ARE willing to give it a go, please send me your efforts via PM, please.
Re: Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 2:09 am
by stephen
I'm having trouble with your page it's not loading.
Re: Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:29 am
by tedsingingfox
Don't know what to tell you, Stephen, as it seems to be working fine for everyone else.Maybe just try again???Let me know.Ted
Re: Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 3:32 pm
by davewalton
Jul 14, 2008, 5:27pm, tedsingingfox wrote:Everybody keeps telling me this is totally WASTED as an instrumental.I'm not sure who said that... maybe that the chord progression is SO good that it would be a shame to just relegate it to "instrumental status". I have to say that after listening to this and another more "complex" song of yours recently, you seem to be particularly good with chord progressions. Sometimes I get stuck like "where to go now...". I'm calling you next time when that happens. Your stuff goes in directions that's different but still a little familiar (a good thing) and very melodic. This one in particular. Too bad I can't do lyrics.
Re: Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:30 am
by tedsingingfox
Jul 15, 2008, 6:32pm, davewalton wrote:Jul 14, 2008, 5:27pm, tedsingingfox wrote:Everybody keeps telling me this is totally WASTED as an instrumental.I'm not sure who said that... maybe that the chord progression is SO good that it would be a shame to just relegate it to "instrumental status". I have to say that after listening to this and another more "complex" song of yours recently, you seem to be particularly good with chord progressions. Sometimes I get stuck like "where to go now...". I'm calling you next time when that happens. Your stuff goes in directions that's different but still a little familiar (a good thing) and very melodic. This one in particular. Too bad I can't do lyrics. WHOA!!! Seriously? Coming from you, Dave, that truly means a great deal to me. Thank you for saying so.OK, now back to trying for lyrics...
Re: Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:46 pm
by ponch
Ted my bro, how can you always came up with such beautiful music all the time?! what's the recipe my friend?I thought the music can be both instrumental and a song with lyrics version, I would love to help ..but hey I'm not a lyricist! Wish you all the best for the lyrics adventures, cheers !Ponch
Re: Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:23 pm
by tedsingingfox
PONCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!What a nice thing for you to say. Thank you, my brother.All I can tell you is that I try to "sing" via the movement of my chord progressions, and then I'll go back later and find what I think is the inherent melody inside it.I doubt that makes much sense, but that's how I attempt to go about it.Bottome line, I'm SO flattered you would make such a comment.I am praying everyday that some way will present itself for you to be able to join us again at the Road Rally this year.But in the meantime, my friend...EAT!!!
Re: Need lyrics to match the music...
Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 3:18 am
by matthoggard
Ted,what is the time signature? Maybe im just a little hung over. I was having trouble feeling the bars and measures. If you dont mind, Id like to give this a shot. I thought it was a 3/4 thing but it seems your using a borrowed time signature at the "turnaround". Maybe I need more coffee??