The Shallow Returns!
Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2019 5:40 pm
Hey everyone,
So today's forwards were... interesting. Some really great tracks.. others were a little left of field. Even the ones we seemed to like the most didn't 100% fit the listing criteria.
660 songs submitted, 16 forwarded. I'd really love to see what other people did with this listing, in comparison to the forwards. So first up, here's my track. My return was for the following reason (in the "other" box): You did a good job developing the vocal in a haunting tone but the lyric and topline need stronger hook appeal as well a melodic style that's infectious and connects emotionally.
the song can be found here: https://soundcloud.com/shalee-jade-gherbaz/ache
Looking forward to hearing your tracks!
Shalee
So today's forwards were... interesting. Some really great tracks.. others were a little left of field. Even the ones we seemed to like the most didn't 100% fit the listing criteria.
660 songs submitted, 16 forwarded. I'd really love to see what other people did with this listing, in comparison to the forwards. So first up, here's my track. My return was for the following reason (in the "other" box): You did a good job developing the vocal in a haunting tone but the lyric and topline need stronger hook appeal as well a melodic style that's infectious and connects emotionally.
the song can be found here: https://soundcloud.com/shalee-jade-gherbaz/ache
Looking forward to hearing your tracks!
Shalee