Hey fellow passengers! I have a finished song that I've been shopping around for a while, and the feedback I've gotten consistently is that the vocals need a better, more contemporary, organic sound.
Aside from that, I've been told by several of TAXI's screeners and others in the industry that this has a lot of potential. It is far from my first song, but I'd love to see this one land somewhere and I need your help!
Take a listen, read through the lyrics, and please reach out if you'd like to like to work on this with me! Thanks!
The song is called, "One More Shot," and this is my most recent mix.
https://soundcloud.com/jeremy-e-o-ander ... pzZbfGGnuP
LYRICS:
You wanna be the big man?
Come on, ya gotta gimme some more
You wanna be the big kahuna?
Come on, gotta gimme some more, yeah
You wanna show me what you’re made of?
Come on, gotta gimme some more
You wanna show me that you’re better than me?
Come on, gotta gimme some more, yeah
This life is all about mistakes and how you prove yourself
This fight is harder than you think, but don’t give up now
That’s right, you’d better show your face to those who’d steal your crown
‘Cause if you can’t give up and give it one more shot
You might as well quit while you’re down, hey!
You wanna make the big bucks?
Come on, ya gotta gimme some more
You wanna drive a big ass truck?
Come on, gotta gimme some more, yeah
You say you’ve got ambition and vision?
Come on, gotta gimme some more
You say you’ve got the big, big picture?
Come on, gotta gimme some more, yeah
This life is all about mistakes and how you prove yourself
This fight is harder than you think, but don’t give up now
That’s right, you’d better show your face to those who’d steal your crown
‘Cause if you can’t give up and give it one more shot
You might as well quit while you’re down, hey!
Gimme your resume, maybe I’ll look at it once or twice of you’re lucky
Gimme your resume, maybe I’ll push it through to those who want it
But it’s never enough, it’s never enough, it’s never enough
Gimme your resume, maybe I’ll look at it once or twice of you’re lucky
Gimme your resume, maybe I’ll push it through to those who want it
But it’s never enough, it’s never enough, it’s never enough
Hey yeah, yeah, yeah!
This life is all about mistakes and how you prove yourself
This fight is harder than you think, but don’t give up now
That’s right, you’d better show your face to those who’d steal your crown
‘Cause if you can’t give up and give it one more shot
You might as well quit while you’re down, hey!
‘Cause if you can’t give up and give it one more shot
You might as well quit while you’re down, hey!
‘Cause if you can’t give up and give it one more shot
You might as well quit while you’re down
WANTED:Confident Contemporary Singer for Finished Song!
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WANTED:Confident Contemporary Singer for Finished Song!
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Re: WANTED:Confident Contemporary Singer for Finished Song!
Hey there, this song def is catchy. I really like the vibe you have going on. Did you end up getting it re-recorded with better vocals yet or are you still waiting for the right vocalist to come along?:)
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Re: WANTED:Confident Contemporary Singer for Finished Song!
Nope, this song is still waiting for a new singer!
Full-time father & full-time RVer with background in mechanical engineering, music performance, and modern dance accompaniment.
MacBook Pro 2019 - Logic Pro X - Korg Microkey Air - Sennheiser HD280 Pro
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