When She Cries (Rock)

[kitz]

Thanks Bill, I thought I had that problem solved - shouldn't be too hard to fix that.Casey, my last 3 returns (last nite) had all good things to say, pretty good production scores and the only comment was I needed a "musical" hook in all 3 tunes. So - between that and you guys I think I am getting the message. Although the forum has heard and responded to all 3 tunes - Nobody said anything about them lacking a hook. Well the screener did. So now I have to reconsider the work I have done and think along those lines. All in the name of progress... Will try some of your ideas when I have a chance to belt it out. May be a few days. Thanks for taking the time!!Kitz