Your Best First lines

burpo · Post by **burpo** » Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:12 pm

Here's one a screener asked me to change, thought it was profane-

I have to say, my favorite days
most always start like crap

Then I start to open
to what falls in my lap

mojobone · Post by **mojobone** » Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:31 am

I would have complimented you on the freshness of the rhyme, heh.

marcblack30 · Post by **marcblack30** » Tue Dec 20, 2011 2:03 pm

Hello, I'm Johnny Cash.
-Cash

It's rainin' but there ain't a cloud in the sky
Musta been a tear from your eye
Everything'll be okay
Funny thought I felt a sweet summer breeze
Musta been you sighin' so deep
Don't worry we're gonna find a way
-The Boss

feaker66 · Post by **feaker66** » Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:02 pm

wow moj, there are so many

Many times when I am all alone, I sing this one. Just sounds good with just the acoustic

In the chilly hours and minutes of uncertainty
I want to be
In the warm hold of your lovin' mind

I might as well just try.......

randwool · Post by **randwool** » Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:55 pm

Casey H wrote:I always liked The Eagles:

He was a hard-headed man
He was brutally handsome, and she was terminally pretty

"Terminally pretty"... love that...

Casey

Ok, I always thought the words were "terminally gray", which sort of fit the song too...

stephencollins · Post by **stephencollins** » Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:22 pm

Van Morrison has a few good lines ...
"Have I told you lately that I love you
Have I told you there’s no one above you
Fill my heart with gladness
Take away my sadness
Ease my troubles, that’s what you do"

Steve

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