Your opinion please

[Casey H]

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[johnnydean1]

Quote:HiI could use some opinions on this song concept. The verse lyrics are not written yet, but the chorus ones are. The (rough) mp3 snippet at www.caseysongs.com/TimeAndSpaceSnip.mp3 has a verse sung as na-na-na and the chorus sung for real.Purgatory Face___© 2006 Charles P. Hurowitz(chorus)You say that you needSome time or space (time and space?) So I'll sit here wearing My purgatory faceIs it heaven or hell?I wait on yourI wait on yourI wait on your.............. grace What do you think of the melody- verse, pre-chorus, chorus? What do you think of the chorus lyrics and the song concept they portray? Any other comments? I've been sitting on this one for a while.Thanks CaseyPS Nomi: I like your idea of not repeating that last chorus line 3 times until later (or at the end) of the songs. Thanks!Good one Casey,I like as is.Commercial yet not predictable.If that's you singing,you should be doing more!A bit like Glen Frey.

[Casey H]

Thanks JohnnyNo, not me singing. You will never hear that... It's pretty damn bad. You are hearing Dan Marfisi who did that quick rough track for me.casey

[nomiyah]

post it when it's finished casey

[nutunes]

Hey CaseyLike the feel... As an experiment, when it's finished, If you want to send over an instrumental we can put our "blind" input into it & send it back over to see if you can use anything we come up with.let me knowRegardsPhil

[Casey H]

Bump Hey, where are you all? Ern, Drew, Rockerman, rockinthebox, et al? If you don't like it, that's OK too. Casey

[rockmann]

Hey Casey...Sorry... been extremely busy lately with the 'day job'. I'll be sure to take a listen to this evening and post my thoughts.

[rockmann]

Nice work, Casey... I do like the melody and the whole structure actually. It is a bit commercial, as mentioned, but I think it has pretty good promise. I hear lots of vocal harmonies with this. Could be really cool.. Keep at it and post back.

[Casey H]

Thanks RockermanI know its a very rough thing with no verse lyrics and it needs work. I've been hanging on to this for a while because I never came up with verse lyrics (if I did, then I'd add a bridge)... I also stole some of the chord changes for another song, but hell-- I can steal from my own stuff, can't I? Casey