Afraid To Fly lyric

[jkkurtis]

We recorded this song last fall and people seemed to dig the lyric a lot and i wanted to get some more opinions on it and am hoping you will let me know what you think... music is avail. if y'all want to hear the lyric with the music.. cheers!!!“Afraid To Fly” © JKMusicwerks 2007She was born in God’s handsWith a fragile heartTossed into this worldNot sure where to startLife got complicatedSomewhere along the wayNot knowing what to doShe just turned to run awayAnd she is runningHidin’ behind her eyesAnd she is runningNever stops to realizeShe has a smileShe hides behind her tearsAnd finds it hard to believeThat someone really caresShe’s beautiful she’s beautifulLike the clear blue skyBut she’s an angel That’s afraid to flyShe went out looking for loveAnd never found what she was lookin’ forAs soon as the times got realShe’d run through the doorThat’s the same one That I held for her beforeAnd she is runningHidin’ behind her eyesAnd she is runningNever stops to realizeShe has a smileShe hides behind her tearsAnd finds it hard to believeThat someone really caresShe’s beautiful she’s beautifulLike the clear blue skyBut she’s an angel That’s afraid to flyShe’s insecure and she don’t need to beWhen it comes to her she means everythingAnd she’s beautifulShe has a smileShe hides behind her tearsAnd finds it hard to believeThat someone really caresShe’s beautiful she’s beautifulLike the clear blue skyBut she’s an angel That’s afraid to fly

[dukenemesis]

Thats an awesome lyric you go there mate. A definated 10/10 from me. I love deep and powerful lyrics like this. Do you have a recording of it anywhere?

[jkkurtis]

Thanks for your comment on the lyrics... much much appreciated on this end as this song means a lot to me on a personal level... we are building up the myspace page right now, but yes you can check this song out there at www.myspace.com/jkmusicwerks would love to hear what you think of it musically as well.

[linziellen]

Really great, universal feel. I like the music too, quite James Blunt if you don't mind me saying. That's all I can offer, to me this is sweet on the eyes and ears. Good job.Linzi

[dukenemesis]

Recording was pro, fit together perfectly. Only criticism is it the chorus could have been hammered a bit more. Not that it should be changed, just to me the same kind of tone the whole way though seems.. (cant think of the word) less exciting. But yeah really good job.

[jkkurtis]

Thank you so much for the comments.... Linzi, believe it or not we never heard the James Blunt comparison. Very Cool!!! and Dukenemesis... thank you also for checking out the tune and digging it, espicially the lyric since that's my department .. i agree 100% on the chorus tone in the vocals and we are hoping to get that corrected and add a little country flavor to the music as we shop it in nashville this year.