angst and heartbreak!

[CrimsnSyrn]

Nice, Emily!!

Beautiful stuff!

[feaker66]

Your voice is so pure and the delivery is near perfect.

Like to hear a slight cut in the verb.

Your phone will be ringing off the hook.

Thanks for including us

sincerely

Paul

[LittleRedChurch]

You're excellent. don't know how old but if you're as young as you sound you've got a future!

My concerns would be with the arrangement. Not sure you needed to take the song (referring to the first one, BTW) to a bridge at the 1:30 mark. You had such an effective melody happening already. Intriguing. In my mind, NOT in need of variance. My other concern would be some of the lyrics. Small things. when you say pretend at one point - Pre - tu - hu -hu- hend, to my mind detracts. Also, you have such a pretty deliverance and pretty melody for you to be singing the words Don't drag Me to HELL seems misplaced. It's not a prude thing, obviously, it's more of a flute playing the guitar lick to Whole Lotta Love. Incongruous.

Your great. you're going to get placed. bloody envious am i...

Graham

[coolhouse912]

Lovely stuff Emily! Solid writing & a fine voice. If there's a lot of soprano singer/songwriters out there right now, I'm unaware of them. That should help you develop a niche for your work.

Post your songs here when you're ready to submit to specific listings (along with the listing) & you'll get useful feedback to increase your chances of getting forwarded.

Good luck,
Mike

[emilyfra]

You have no idea how much I appreciate all of this. Thank you all so much.

[ottlukk]

Way sweet, and truly unique voice. Enjoyed my listen very much. Ott