Another Break Up Song

[eeoo]

Tossing my hat in the "break up" song ring, what do you guys think, yay or nay?

https://soundcloud.com/ethan-okamura/she-said-3-6-15

Thanks!

eo

[mikemichnya]

Hey Ethan,

I love the hook! I vote yay, although I wish you'd written a third verse instead of simply repeating the first verse,used the first and last lines as your tag...

[DanLuedke]

That's a winner if I ever heard one. It's so easy to hear this with break up scene.

The sparse lyrics and The repeated verse doesn't bother me because they are so strong and bigger the second time around. Take what you need and leave the rest. The bridge is clever too.

[eeoo]

Thanks for taking the time guys! And yes, you take what you need and you leave the rest , but they should never have taken the very best...

[johnlewitt]

Ethan,

Lovely production. I'd say submit.

John

[songmaster]

I give it a big Yay !!! Nice track. I think it would qualify as "dream pop " song. I love the dreamy feel of this song and also the little interlude at the bridge. Nicely done. The song has a nice " I'm moving on vibe ", sort of like " we had a great relationship, but now it's over. No hard feelings. I would submit it.

Tom

[nylyrics]

Ethan:

Yay. Yes. Thumbs up Google +. Twitter follow Pin it and submit it. This may end up to be their golden ticket.

Andy

[eeoo]

Thanks a lot guys, you've talked me into it!

eo

[SteveC]

Hi,

I say Yay also. Liked the dreamy feel and the harmonies underneath. Catchy hook. Love the sparse lyrics. Less is more in many cases, and the fit here is perfect. Dug the tune.

st


steve

[Piewackit1]

Yup great tune. Submit.