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Are you proud of me?

Post by fishneyes » Thu Nov 13, 2008 6:37 pm

I hope you like these lyrics! Thanks for reading!Shawn White*(Hello Daddy)Remember back in highschool…at the homecoming basketball__ game?Everyone was in the crowd…*(hell)...even grandma and grandpa__ came.With a few seconds left…and the game on the__ line;I put up the shot…*(and...missed)…one more__ time!…..When you closed your__ eyes…I hope you said a prayer for__ me.Cuz those were the times…I got weak in the__ knees.Remember how nervous I was...in front of that...hometown__ crowd?"So I have to ask you.....*(Daddy)...Were you proud__…of me__?"Remember when I got married…it was such a gorgeous__ day?We walked down the aisle…*(and then)...you gave me a_way.I was a walkin' and a talkin'...in that white...wedding__ dress.*(Laugh)* One missed step and a spilled drink…do you remember that__ mess?When you closed your__ eyes…I hope you said a prayer for__ me.Cuz those were the times…I got weak in the__ knees.Remember how nervous I was…in front of that...big ol'__ crowd?"So I have to ask you..…*(Daddy)...Were you proud__…of me__?"The sirens have just sounded…so it might be a long__ night.I'll always love you…*(and Daddy)...something...doesn’t feel__ right!You'll be in my heart and prayers…and I promise I will be__ back.I’m gonna make you proud…fighting for_ freedom...here in I__raq!....*(P.S. Daddy) When you close your__ eyes…I know you’ll say a prayer for__ me.Cuz we went on a mission…and I didn't get weak in the__ knees.I wasn't even nervous…in front of that...hostile__ crowd.And if I don’t make it_ back…*(I have to ask you…Daddy)…Are you proud__…of me__...Are you proud__…of me__……Oh__ Daddy!!…I’m lying in this bed!!…Praying you'll be_____....proud___…of me____....*(Daddy)…...Are you proud_____ of......me_____?…...*(I love you Daddy!!)Are You Proud Of Me (Female Version)

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Re: Are you proud of me?

Post by motomyrtle » Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:59 pm

Hi Shawn,Really like this - great story... Makes no difference to me, but some may say it would be more universal if you didn't nail down a specific conflict, then it would apply to all service women from any country or war. Do you have audio for this?Cheryl

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Re: Are you proud of me?

Post by willied » Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:25 pm

I agree with Cheryl about not dateing the song so all listeners can relate.But then again I read we will be in Iraq until 2011.I like the lyrics and enjoyed the read. The only nit I have with the lyrics is the last chorus. (sad)(Are you proud__…of me__……Oh__ Daddy!!…I’m lying in this bed!!…Praying you'll be_____....proud___…of me____....*(Daddy)…...Are you proud_____ of......me_____?…...*(I love you Daddy!!)Maybe a tag: Daddy will you be proud of meJust my ideas, As I said I enjoyed the read and like where you are going with the song.Bill

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