AXLE -- FINAL MIX? Comments welcome!

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Hey all!I was working on this piece before this listing came out, but was wondering if you think it fits. This tune still is a rough as I work on dynamics and mixing, but all the parts are there (I think). So, other than the standard, "Do you think it fits?" question, I'll also ask you to comment on whether or not it needs more melodic, rhythmic, or instrumental development. Does it go far enough?The song is AXLE (Rough)Here is the link... downloadable from there if you want!NEW MIX AVAILABLE CALLED "AXLE (FINAL)"To hear online: http://www.taxi.com/patellweinUPTEMPO DANCE/ELECTRONICA SONGS and INSTRUMENTALS in the range of The Chemical Brothers, Fatboy Slim, Prodigy, The Crystal Method, etc. are needed by the Project Director at a well-established Los Angeles-based Music Production Company for film and TV licensing. Amazing vocal delivery (both male or female vocals are fine), infectious grooves, great songwriting/instrumentation, and outstanding production are all essential. Lyrically, more universal themes are better and please be sure to stay away from elements that will prevent your song from being forwarded (e.g. uncleared samples). Your writing and production must be stellar... bottom line is that they want new material that’s going to grab them by the neck and demand their attention.Thanks for your feedback!Pat