Baby Don't Cry

[irwin]

Baby Don't Cry©2009 Irwin Byron Abrigo..(1st verse)From the moment I walk in the doorI saw tears in her eyesAnd from the way I held her in my armsI could tell that she had a broken heart-So I asked her what the reasonShe didn't another answerShe lay her head on my shoulderAnd her tear drops felt like rain, so I said-(Chorus)Don't cry don't cry babyForget about the guy that broke your heartforget about him and come to meI will make you happy, give you what you needShow you baby what love can bringI'll make you free do you no wrongForget about him and come to me Baby come to me-(2nd verse)She just think that was the only guy for herSo she just decide to cryAnd I wonder what kind of guyHow can a guy be so blind-From the way I looked into her eyesI could have tell that she was really hurt insideMy questions went unansweredFor she just went on crying, so I said-(Repeat Chorus)-(Bridge)But she tried and she tried but she criedShe cried ah ooh he makes e cryShe said ah ooh he broke my heartShe said ah ooh he said goodbyeShe said ah ooh and I don't know what I'm gonna doShe said she don't know what she's gonna to doAnd I wanna make her mineI wanna make her my girl-(Repeat Chorus)

[deantaylor]

Hey Irwin,I like your chorus. You might consider coming back to the hook again for the last chorus line.There was some interesting phrasing that I couldn't quite get my arms around. Are you going for some kind of 'street talk' here or are some of these typos, like:She didn't another answer ... not sure what this meansSo she just decide to cry .... decided?I could have tell that she was really hurt inside ... do you want 'told' instead of 'tell'The only other thing I noticed was that your verses seem similar ... in what they are saying. It might improve the song to say something more different in verse2. Just an idea.Dean

[irwin]

Hi dean, The phrases that I couldn't understand are typos.She didn't another answer ... She didn't answer or maybe she didn't give an answerSo she just decide to cry .... decided?---YESI could have tell that she was really hurt inside ... do you want 'told' instead of 'tell'-YESI will see how I can improve on the second verse.Thanks alot for the reply.Irwin