C/W review please

[heinsite]

hello, trying this again, though maybe nobody wants to review one of my c/w tunes. . don't know how to post individual tunes, but if you go to:http://taxi.com/heinsite and select "Second Chance" or "I Still Miss Her Kiss, and let me know what you think, good bad or ugly,it would be appreciated.cheers,heinsite out

[ephlat66]

Hey nice stuff. I really like "I Still Miss Her Kiss". The song flows nicely and the steel guitar is very cool. I think the line about "paper napkin purgatory" is brilliant, but might be too... what... obscure maybe? to not be off-putting to screeners. All in all a very well crafted song.Second chance is pretty good. Very pretty melody, but for some reason the song as a whole seems to drag for me.Hope that helps!Donoh, btw - to post a single song, right click on the "play" button and then click "copy shortcut". Then just paste it where you want it.

[horacejesse]

Good stuff, Warren. Well sung. Is that you? I like the steel too and the purgatory line. The "why you didn't want my name" line seemed kind of stock.With songs like these I am confident you can be a competitor here.But...she kicks him out then heads down south. Why would she bother to kick him out if she is just going to leave anyway? The word "or" might clear that up.They are strong songs however. Did you produce these yourself or did you send them out to be done?

[heinsite]

thank you Don and horacejesse,on ephlet's comment on the purgatory line, i HAVE had some screeners not like it, however, since everyone basically knows what it is/means, etc. it does work, so thanks for the comments. this tune is being judged many times this month, so let's see what happens.to answer the production q's, i sent them out to a nashville demo company, i'll mention them if you ask, they do a great job. all my words and music, with their edification of steel guitar (not many of us in san jose know someone who plays that country staple) and they call with suggestions, sometimes taken, sometimes not. overall guys, very good job in your reviews, and i think on the "negative" comments (which i appreciate) you are right on--but being a stubborn ass, i've heard them before and have chosen to leave the tunes as is--if you wish to listen to my own mini-somwhat crude productions, check out the same sight, i'd recommend a couple of the following--ALL ME--which is why i'm sending several out!! ha!check out: "Too Much I Don't Know" and "Rock, Paper, Scissors". Don by the way, thanks for the how to post a single tune--i'll try it manana.the best to all, good eveningwarren hein