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Call on Him

Post by jademusic » Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:21 pm

Could you give us feedback on this one. Thanks for the support from some of you.The name of the song is Call On Himhttp://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.....&songID=7528127

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Re: Call on Him

Post by taketwo » Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:58 pm

Hey Jade, It could just be my computer , but the vocals are very faint and hard to hear.

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Re: Call on Him

Post by jademusic » Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:14 pm

plays fine on soundclick, taxi and myspace. Its blasting me out the window. Try www.myspace.com/jademusicpublishing

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Post by k o star » Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:15 pm

hi Jade... the vocals definitely need to come up a lot... it's too buried in the mix.HTH-Kel
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Re: Call on Him

Post by jwebbinspired » Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:34 am

Hey Jade, Do you have lyrics that we can read? I like the songs' groove. Production-wise, I don't know the term, but it sounds kinda off. It's not really clean I guess is what I mean. The vocals definitely need to come up. I really like the song from what I hear. From listening I wanted the hook of the song to be "All You Gotta Do" but that's just me.Andy

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Re: Call on Him

Post by orest » Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:31 am

I like the song, I think it could work fine in the right place, but you need to work on some things: 1. Are you using software on all instruments? It sounded very synthetic, the guitar and the drums. 2. I don't think you need to add more volume to the voice, but it sounded as if you've removed the high end? EQ the voice more in the high end, and remove some bass.

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Post by jademusic » Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:34 am

Hey guys,Thanks for the feedback. Considering that I have 20 percent hearing in one ear, what you hear "a little off" sounds normal to me. Come to think of it, it may be the effects that drowns out the vocals. I'll take it back in the studio, clean it up and give you guys a second listen. The title, "All you Gotta Do" is a little catchy so there you go. That's the new title. The lyrics are on the bottom of the page on soundclick.com but here they are if you can't find them.It's a brand new day/the sun is shining bright/The children aren't listening and you're feeling uptight/Remember there's a friend that you can put your trust in/When you got Jesus, you'll always win Chorus: Jesus is the way, truth and the life/He is the answer that will things alright/He will forgive you of all of your sins/All you gotta do, all you gotta do is call on him He will carry you, when you're feeling down/He will lift your spirits when no one's around/He's closer than a brother, than you'll ever know/I know that Jesus loves us cause the Bible tells me so Repeat Chorus I know it's hard to trust in, someone who cares/But you gotta know, Let God, let go/Let Him do the repair Repeat Chorus All you gotta do is call on Him Ill be back with the second take.

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Re: Call on Him

Post by jademusic » Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:37 am

Orest,I have a 16 track studio in my keyboard on my Roland GW-7 and then I transferred to Cakewalk's Sonar 8. The vocals I did on Cubase 5.James

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