The listing is below,, a link to the song on soundcloud is below that ,,, I'd love any input you could offer... ( btw this is just a first run rough mix so I could hear all the parts together Don't Judge too harshly

HIGH-ENERGY SKATER ROCK SONGS (A.K.A SKATE PUNK) with Male or Female Vocals are needed by a British Music Licensing Company with GREAT Worldwide Distribution and lots of Movie Trailer and TV Placements.
NOTE: We recently ran this request as TAXI #S200423SK – but the company needs more material! If you submitted to TAXI #S200423SK, please submit different material this time around.
Please submit Mid-to-Up-Tempo Songs that are in the general stylistic ballpark of the references below:
"Fatlip " by Sum 41
"Self Esteem" by The Offspring
"Stickin' In My Eye" by NOFX
https://soundcloud.com/deriktoy/never-g ... e-like-you
Thx in advance!